#49, Curtain call (the final act)

May 28, 2008 23:11


Title: theme #49, Curtain call (the final act)
Author: paws_bells
Characters/pairings: Uchiha Itachi and Haruno Sakura
Genre: Romance/Angst
Word Count: 7433
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me.
Rating: M (Contains content suitable for mature teens and older)
Summary: Sequel to heart strings. It should be obvious by now that they were ( Read more... )

itasaku, naruto, fanfic, angst, #40 - heart strings, m rating, canon, #01 - this is my way as a ninja, chapter 14, romance, paws_bells, sequel, #49 - curtain call, 50_shinobi theme

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Wow and favor person again anonymous May 29 2008, 00:16:37 UTC
We were worried. I do mean we were worried. Everyone from the online forum to the anime convention I was just at. Anyways though, great job once again. I love how everything thing is believable. I also hope you have looked at my past message about the favor. Ii you don't want to do it, it is okay, but I really wish I could find her. Thank you:)

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Re: Wow and favor person again paws_bells May 31 2008, 18:02:23 UTC
xD

Thanks for liking my fic. I'm alive and kicking, I assure you. I have also done you the favor of passing on the message, though I'm not entirely sure why you chose me of all ter other authors (or mediums) out there, or if your friend would respond accordingly.

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Re: Wow and favor person again anonymous May 31 2008, 20:11:08 UTC
It is because we were having a long discussion with a group of people about your fics. So I know she reads them. I don't know what other Itasaku she reads.:)

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nights_fang May 29 2008, 00:51:22 UTC
This chapter has so many great moments for me. Especially these few lines/parts:

Behold, Kisame the Super Blue Nanny.

The whole interaction between Itachi and the twins. And the entire last part was done well.

(You're making the twins the real protagonists of this story, aren't you? XD)

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paws_bells May 31 2008, 17:59:25 UTC
xD

Yes, yes I am. The twins have really grown on me. They were so hard for me to write at first, but well, it gets easier to imagine how they would be like the more I write about them. =p

Glad you liked this chapter, by the way. Kisame is love!!

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me_ninjakitty May 29 2008, 01:40:53 UTC
love the chapter, love the song.

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paws_bells May 31 2008, 17:55:35 UTC
Thank you. =)

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valesck May 30 2008, 01:59:30 UTC
As per usual, it's another wonderful chapter of Curtain Call. I found a lot of it funny and it left me giggling and smiling like an idiot during my graphics class when I read it. Although it bothered me that these three year olds acted as if they're at least ten or twelve. Of course I have to remember that it's not entirely impossible for kids to end up like this. After all, I have cousins who play at an amazing level on the Violin at age three or four. But that was with a great deal of coaxing from their mother. I suppose the twins have a very nurturing mother in Sakura, which makes their intellect at all possible ( ... )

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paws_bells May 31 2008, 17:55:13 UTC
Thanks!! Your comments always makes me so happy, so ramble all you want!! =)

I have finally reinstalled all the relevant programs back into my ancient laptop already, thank god. Though I wonder why I'm even updating everything, seeing that I'm about to get a new one soon, and then I will have to install applications all over again. Joy.

Glad that this chapter made you laugh, by the way. I know what you mean by my version of Itachi being entirely different from Kishimoto's abruptly revealed characterization of well, Itachi. Though it really shouldn't be a surprise at all, I suppose. Gee.

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nenny189 May 31 2008, 00:49:05 UTC
YEA!!! I was getting worried. This is a great chapter and Itachi's interaction with his sons is perfect...they really do steal the show though I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^

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P.S. Have you read the latest Naruto chapter(402)...gaaaahhhhh! -_- Sasgay is officially on my anime shit list and I don't think there is anything he can do at this point to get off it....EVER! *Beats Sasuke with a spork* GROW A BRAIN YOU CHICKENHEADED MORON!!!! *beats again*

I mean seriously Kishi give the Sasgay ass kissing fest a rest

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paws_bells May 31 2008, 17:43:25 UTC
xDD

I'm glad you liked the twins!!

And I definitely agree. Kishimoto's obessession with Sasuke is very off putting, to say the least. He created a perfectly wonderful plot, and then proceeded to screw everything up. Such a waste.

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