Comments | paws_bells: #49, Curtain call (the final act)

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#49, Curtain call (the final act)

May 07, 2008 23:20

Title: theme #49, Curtain call (the final act)
Author: paws_bells
Characters/pairings: Uchiha Itachi and Haruno Sakura
Genre: Romance/Angst
Word Count: 6441
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me.
Rating: M (Contains content suitable for mature teens and older)
Summary: Sequel to heart strings. It should be obvious by now that they were ( Read more... )

itasaku, naruto, fanfic, angst, #40 - heart strings, m rating, canon, #01 - this is my way as a ninja, romance, chapter 11, paws_bells, sequel, #49 - curtain call, 50_shinobi theme

Comments 10

nights_fang May 7 2008, 18:40:21 UTC

As well written as always. Sasuke's actions are justified, Naruto is still a lovable idiot, and Kakashi will always be Kakashi.

And the twins stole the show!

paws_bells May 10 2008, 21:00:08 UTC

xD

I'm glad you love the chapter in general, and I'm super glad that you love the twins. I was somewhat worried that my portrayal of the children would become somewhat cliched. =)

nights_fang May 10 2008, 23:45:14 UTC

Nope not cliched at all. Actually it is a trend amongst twins - At least from what I've experienced - that one is more quiet and obidient, while the other is more playful. And Kuro makes such a cute mini-me of Itachi! *Has insane urge to sqee like a rabid fangirl!*

Did you read chapter 399 btw? It screwed with the mind completely.

artis_lasair May 8 2008, 02:29:47 UTC

Paws, this last chapter was great xd! I need to say, I was expecting to see Sasuke freaking out because Itachi´s sons, but was much better to read about him babysitting them xd.

I really need to do a fanart of 'feeding babies time' xd, because I just can´t take this scene away from my mind xd.

Give some weeks to finish some pendencies, but I will do it xd

bye

paws_bells May 10 2008, 21:28:59 UTC

I know I'm a few days too late, but I want to tell you how much I appreciate that you are doing this in your spare time, despite that you are still doing some consulting work, right? The last time I heard from you?

So I'm sincerely thanking you for your time and effort to dedicating this fanart to Curtain Call. =)

artis_lasair May 9 2008, 03:43:49 UTC

yay! Isn´t a finished page, but I hope you enjoy o.o.

http://pgushi.deviantart.com/art/Lunch-time-pg-1-85138626

If you wish to change something while I´m drawing the pages, let me know, ok?

I´ll try to draw that quite funny 'lunch time' xd

bye

Artis

paws_bells May 10 2008, 21:30:42 UTC

I definitely enjoyed it! Thanks for drawing this adorable piece of fanart for CC. =) Can't wait to see more!

me_ninjakitty May 9 2008, 09:11:44 UTC

It occured to me when I was reading this that I rarely leave you feedback, which concerning me (who only ever leaves bad feedback) means that your a really good writer and that I love your stories.
I also found myself re-reading some of your other Naruto fics and the sheer fact that I can still enjoy re-reading your stories over and over is another positive thing I should tell you about. You're one of those writers whose stories don't lose their edge after one read through. There's always something there which makes me smile or laugh or feel happy while reading them. Thankyou.
I also love how you write the characters and how even in your AU's theirs still the feeling of the chracters we all know and love from the anime and manga. Thanks again!

Ninjakitty

paws_bells May 10 2008, 21:52:53 UTC

Thank you, for thinking so highly of my fics. I'm not sure if I deserve all of your compliments, but nonetheless I'm going to be thickskinned about it and accept them all, all the same. =)

The fact that I can make people happy with my writing make me feel good about myself too, and I have to thank you for your kind comments. To be honest, I have been in a pickle lately; I have found myself stuck in a writing/somewhat self-doubting rut for the past few days and was feeling a little disassociated from my writing and from myself. It really is an odd sensation. My fingers are itching to type something even when my mind seems listless and uncooperative, and I'm really starting to become annoyed with myself.

But you are definitely not interested in hearing about my problems, and I'm sure I will get over it eventually, hopefully soon because I'm going insane. =p Just kidding, of course.

Anyway, thanks. =)

me_ninjakitty May 12 2008, 00:13:34 UTC

I know what it's like to want to type something but you mind just doesn't want to take part. I'm co-authoring a story and at the moment we've hit a brick wall. Where not suire where to go....

I wasn't able to tell from your writing that you've been in a pickle. It's proof you are a good writer.