Comments | paws_bells: #49, Curtain call (the final act)

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#49, Curtain call (the final act)

Mar 21, 2008 22:09

Title: theme #49, Curtain call (the final act)
Author: paws_bells
Characters/pairings: Uchiha Itachi and Haruno Sakura
Genre: Romance/Angst
Word Count: 3432
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me.
Rating: M (Contains content suitable for mature teens and older)
Summary: Sequel to heart strings. It should be obvious by now that they were ( Read more... )

itasaku, naruto, fanfic, chapter 3, angst, #40 - heart strings, m rating, canon, #01 - this is my way as a ninja, romance, paws_bells, sequel, #49 - curtain call, 50_shinobi theme

Comments 3

valesck March 21 2008, 15:42:52 UTC

The masses are stirring. Many are slowly but surely crawling towards the exits of their caves, abandoning any immediate work-in-progress projects such as the various Kishimoto voodoo dolls and lynching tools. Their previous anger being replaced by sudden.. entertainment?

Oh yes. "It" has been updated. Let the squealing begin!

.. Sorry. I Couldn't resist. XD

Wonderful chapter as always, fluid but his actions during this chapter kept itching at the back of my mind. It's not entirely impossible for him to do this, but rather he needs a concrete reason to avoid being called an "OOC Gary Stu".

So knowing that you're probably terribly allergic to meaningless airhead characters with names slapped onto them to make them seem like they're Itachi, Sakura, Naruto, etc.. There had to be a reason. An X factor that had occurred within the story, if you will. Mid chapter I realized what it could be, what it had to be.

Oh you are devious. Brownie points! :D

.. If I'm wrong, you get gruel points. And no one ever cashes those in. D ( ... )

paws_bells March 21 2008, 16:33:34 UTC

Thanks. =)

Crawling towards the exits of their caves? But I always stayed in mine...and my kishi voodoo doll has just been eaten up by my dog, I mean wolf. Oops. xDD

Aw, Itachi really seemed Gary Stu? And devious? What devious? *has no idea what you mean* xD

valesck March 21 2008, 16:40:42 UTC

Oops. I didn't mean to make it seem like I called him a Gary Stu. He doesn't seem like that at all, more like he has a reason for what he's doing and we just don't know it yet.

And by devious, I mean that I think I know what you're planning but I could be so definitely wrong. But that's just me.