Entry #17: Cue the Sun, Part One (WORD COUNT: 578)

[pauljoy]

Mmm, I apologize about this entry. I had this sudden inspiration to write this one scene - this entry - and well, it's the only one I've got! I've been trying to lead up to this scene but they've all come across to me lacking something, so I've decided not to put it in. I may pick up where I left off perhaps another time, perhaps not - depends on

Comments

[pauljoy]

Thanks, this really means a lot. I haven't decided yet, but I'm just going to say that this comment is one of the things that will MAKE me continue it! I will put myself on tenderhooks and such (I don't know what that means, but it sounds good) until I finish it (because I never finish things =[). Guess we'll just see, thanks again!

[pauljoy]

Well I consider myself new, but it seems like more and more people are joining! So I'm definitely not the newest. I joined around the end of October and enjoying every minute of it since then :)

[xblack_out]

Kekekekekekeke.
I am hooked.
That is all.

But no, seriously, this is so good.
And I'm ridiculously curious. Why is Marigold there? Why is she so angry?
Please, please, please continue.
And now, that is all.

[pauljoy]

I shall! ON FRIDAY.
Slash, we have comm. hours on Saturday. Geh.

[jewelsverne]

Ooh, this is excellent! This Marigold character fascinates me. I hope you continue this. Great job!! :)

[pauljoy]

Thanks Jewels :D I think I WILL continue it actually <3

[rephen]

Intriguing! More, please! Would love to know about the Professor and Marigold very much :D I like how compact the scene is, you established a very dark, prisony mood with very brief descriptions. Very well written. I enjoyed reading and am hooked!

[pauljoy]

Merci <3 I definitely will continue this!

[pauljoy]

Ahh. Maybe it's just me, since I wrote it - I sort of have an insight to the things that I want to develop in the story. Thanks for reading too! It's great that I get so many different views about my entries.