FIC: Remus Lupin and the Revolt of the Creatures, Chapter 12 / 21 (PG-13), part one

[paulamcg]

Title: Remus Lupin and the Revolt of the Creatures, Chapter Twelve: The Magic of Needs and Flames, part one
Author: PaulaMcG
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: (subtly, eventually) Remus/Sirius
Chapter summary: Remus returns to a childhood scene - also in a memory of how a goblin taught him a lesson.
Word count: around 5,700
Disclaimer: Remus won't help me

Comments

[kellychambliss]

I love your description of the art: not only is it vivid and easy to picture, but it shows such an inventive use of magical possibilities.

As usual, your OCs are fully-developed and interesting, and Remus's backstory continues to unfold in compelling ways. I love watching Remus subtly challenge Dumbledore (who is very IC), and the device of having Remus write to Harry is very effective. It allows him (Remus) to distance his thoughts, give them coherence and order, and yet clearly, it's to himself that he writes as much as to anyone else.

I believe that at least subconsciously we only meant to make our world a better place.

Excellent line.

[paulamcg]

I’m so happy that my magical art, my OCs and my Dumbledore appeal to you. And after I’ve allowed the letters too have such a big role in the story, it’s particularly reassuring to hear how well they work for you. Thank you so much for another wonderful comment!