Lip Service

Nov 02, 2015 22:04


Pairing: Taehyun/Seungyoon
Rating: PG (fluff)
Summary: Taehyun is guilty, and Seungyoon makes it worse by pretending everything's okay.
Word Count: 1,987
Note: This canon drabble is inspired by that incident on one of their Japan Tour shows, where during Kangnam's Glamorous Sky stage, Taehyun accidentally kicks Seungyoon in the face. LOL.
Taehyun is uneasy )

seungyoon, kangnam, winner, taehyun

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I love you Patti!! ext_3306666 November 2 2015, 15:24:15 UTC
*squeal!!!!

I love this!! Im crying raibows. They are sooo cute!! I love TBH that reaction after the incident can be expected from Seungyoon *rolls coz its Taehyun! ♡
They are soo cute and I love just everything about this *hugs you
Ive been thristy for Kangnam and you just answered my prayer.

I love how you bring out the emotions to your writing and it’s soo clear to me that I can feel it. Its one of the things I love about you.

Thank you so much for this ♡♡♡

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poppotato November 2 2015, 15:43:39 UTC
you haven't lost the knack at all Patti! this was short but really well-formed and complete as a story.

it was so good the way you built up the tension, and Taehyun's impulsive action in kissing Seungyoon felt so natural, i could literally imagine the scene unfolding in my mind's eye. this is what i meant when i say you're amazing at writing action and dialogue! i can always envision everything you write so clearly :)

your characterization was totally on point! from Taehyun's stubborn awkwardness to Seungyoon's endearing little smugness at the end, those two silly fools! i love how Seungyoon patiently tolerated Taehyun's nonsense, and i can totally see that's how he handles Taehyun in reality hahaha

great fic, love all the positive overtones! happy fluff without being overly sweet if you get what i mean heh! you did so good as always <3

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