Comments | patita_fea: SPN fic: The Open Invitation

patita_fea

SPN fic: The Open Invitation

Jun 25, 2008 10:40

He looked nearly as miserable and frightened as I felt. “Katie,” he said painfully. “The mora’s going to keep haunting your nightmares until somebody kicks her ugly ass. And nobody can do that but you.”

Chapter Three

supernatural, fanfic, open invitation, ben braeden, futurefic, kate doolittle, nazareth verse

Comments 23

tui25 July 16 2008, 03:18:59 UTC

Just read your story, I came here via supernatural story finders, and have to admit, to lengthening my lunch break (and yes I think lunch at 2:30 is perfectly normal) just to finish and and have a quick look at your other stories. Are you going to write another chapter or a sequel? Because it just isn't fair to leave your readers hanging...
I really like you characterization and the idea of Sam and Dean settling down and Dean having a family makes me smile. What about writing how Ben found Dean and Sam and how he started hunting?
Hoping to read more soon (and I just friended you, so I won't miss any new posts (I hope you take this as a compliment and not as me being very rude)- if you like to friend me back, no problem, although I seldom post and don't write).

patita_fea July 16 2008, 15:24:22 UTC

Haha - SPN fanfic: interfering with work schedules since 2005.

Thank you for taking the time to read and to leave such a kind review. It's especially gratifying to hear that the characterization clicked for you.

Friend away! Chapter three should show up on your flist soon, so no worries. :) I won't leave you hanging.

drgaellon November 29 2008, 07:03:04 UTC

I love the fact that Dean is teaching Becky about the Stones. Weechesters are wonderful, but next-generation Weechesters are something special. :)

patita_fea November 30 2008, 18:04:47 UTC

You know, I've always been under the impression that many people try to avoid next-generation Weechesters, so it's wonderful to hear that you liked daddy!Dean here. Thank you so much!

drgaellon November 30 2008, 18:10:44 UTC

Well, that's why they're special, because not many people write them, and fewer do it this well. I think most people are either writing Wincest, or they figure the boys will never settle down to have families.

faithintheboys March 2 2009, 20:17:42 UTC

I think Dean is the best Dad in the world and Becky is just as adorable. I love this.

saberivojo November 27 2013, 13:28:02 UTC

So did I read this the first time and not remember? *ponders*

patita_fea November 27 2013, 19:10:55 UTC

That is actually quite probable, given that I haven't touched the damn thing for five freaking years. *shame*

I'm glad it's held up well enough that you can still enjoy it though! I love Ben too, and I missed hanging out with him and Sam and Dean in my head.

Thanks for giving me the comment-love! It always brings the smiles.