Chapter One
futurefic, spoilers thru 3.16, particularly for "The Kids Are Alright"
Katie and Annette Doolittle, Ben and Lisa Braeden, Sam, Dean, OFCs
Rated R for language
Disclaimer: They're all Kripke's, and I'm not profiting.
Note: This is unbeta'd, and I would be very grateful for a fresh pair of eyes on the next few chapters.
Chapter One
December
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*bites nails waiting for more*
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So not sorry about the cliffhanger. Mine is an evil laugh.
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I loved the episode and liked the references back to all the kids being piled in the Impala after they were rescued.
Can't wait to see where you take the story, and if you're still stuck for a beta, I'd be happy to look it over for you.
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review and for the beta offer. May I take you up on that and send you Chapter Two?
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And of course you can!
My mail addy is torranach at gmail dot com
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Thanks very much. I'm gonna send it right over and start with the authorial fretting.
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So glad I could feed the fires of Ben!passion. Thanks very much for the feedback. :)
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So, yeah, you have the characterizations down pat and I would encourage (or, um, make that COERCE) you to continue.
Eagerly awaiting a new chapter... :D
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Lynn: How old is Sam supposed to be?
Duckie: Um... Thirty-eight?
Lynn: Hmph. Just so you know, the onset of presbyopia does not begin until well into your forties. He could perhaps have adult onset myopia, but that, my dear, is near-sightedness, and would not require reading glasses.
Duckie: ... Oh.
Lynn: You're not out of your teens yet. Of course thirty-eight sounds like death's door to you. Vision going, crow's feet...
I considered coming back with, "Maybe Lilith's white light of death partially blinded the poor puppy. You don't know." But I'd already made myself look quite childish enough ( ... )
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Glad you're enjoying it. :)
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