will drive you mad (Miles/Claire, PG-13)

[flaky_artist]

Title: will drive you mad
Fandom: LOST
Characters: Miles/Claire
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 108
Summary: He's not even sure she's real. (prompt - kiss, written for lost_in_108)

Comments

[cloudytea]

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS. :) So beautifully written, as usual, and the imagery's just astounding.

[flaky_artist]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.

[squeakyboots]

I came to check this out because the idea of Claire/Miles intrigued me, and I have to say, the tone of this was not at all what I expected: I love the "ghostly" feeling you convey, and I like Miles' almost fearful reaction to Claire. You get so much mood across in a such a small number of words. It's very impressive.

[flaky_artist]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[mustaza]

Holy variables! What a rare --yet interesting-- pairing!

I loved that you set this in DHARMA days. I've always wondered if Claire traveled through time as the rest of Sawyer's group.

Favorite phrase? The distant lights from Dharmaville burn imprints against his eyes, and he knows she'll disappear the moment he looks away.

[flaky_artist]

Thank you very much!

[flaky_artist]

Thanks so much, glad you liked it!

[aboutbunnies]

Oh, wow. This is just incredible. I love the tone you convey here, Miles' ghosts and her voice in his head. Love it.

[flaky_artist]

Thank you so much!