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ext_341782 June 20 2011, 12:31:53 UTC
Definitely! I changed tense and POV in one of my manuscripts and there were scenes I didn't want to do away with because they had a definite place in the story. So I rewrote them with my new MC. A lot changed, but the emotional core of the scene remained.

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patesden June 20 2011, 13:03:00 UTC
I love writing early drafts, but there's a whole different joy in making changes like you did and seeing the shiny results.

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bogwitch64 June 20 2011, 16:57:01 UTC
Oh, that's wonderful! So evocative and precise without being heavy-handed.

I make it a not-so-fabulous habit of recycling scenes through various POV. If it doesn't work in one POV, I try another. I have a rule--if a scene is not working after three days, it's in the wrong place or the wrong POV. It is almost ALWAYS the wrong POV.

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patesden June 20 2011, 18:02:46 UTC

The last couple of stories I've written have been single pov, so it's been interesting to go back to a story where I'm playing with multiple povs--and cutting a long time favorite.

Tonight, I'm swapping a chase through the woods at night scene from the pov of a man on foot to the pov of a character with a birds-eye-view.

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anabelgonzalez June 20 2011, 19:46:03 UTC
I am a very emotional writer so if a scene doesn't fit somewhere but I like the emotion I make it appear for other MC or in another place.

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patesden June 20 2011, 20:24:56 UTC
I think you're smart to save emotional scenes and reuse them. I tend to ax things quickly before I can talk myself out of it. Luckily, I save hard copies as I go along :)

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patesden June 20 2011, 20:26:30 UTC
I was glad to see your name in the new WID classroom. The side I'm on looks pretty empty right now.

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