Comments | pastelrains: Of Kunai and Grandchildren: Sasuke/Sakura

lalagirl208 in pastelrains

Of Kunai and Grandchildren: Sasuke/Sakura

Apr 24, 2008 19:44

Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Sasuke & Sakura
Genre: Romance/Humor

( Of Kunai and Grandchildren )

pairing: sasuke/sakura, series: naruto, type: drabble, category: fluff

Comments 8

obscuritystar April 24 2008, 21:02:32 UTC

Awww. so SWEET! :D I totally melted! Sasuke is too cute here :)

lalagirl208 April 25 2008, 07:55:33 UTC

thank you very much~ ehehhe... ^_^

your icon is sexy~ ehehehe~

flutie2891 April 25 2008, 20:49:57 UTC

Very cute. :) The present tense, second person PoV is a good way to convey what's going on while still cramming all of Sasuke's thoughts in there. And the adorable grandkids XD

lalagirl208 April 26 2008, 03:22:05 UTC

Thank you very much~ ^_^

hehe, I love the second person PoV... it's cute~ XD (and the grandkids~ XD Yesh, they will be adorable... with black hair and green eyes, i hope... XD

storycrazygirl April 27 2008, 15:12:23 UTC

That was great!! Great fan fiction: if only Sasuke WAS like that!!

lalagirl208 April 27 2008, 15:38:22 UTC

haha~ XD yeah, maybe.. after he gets over his issues, he might start being sweet~ XD

storycrazygirl April 28 2008, 03:14:03 UTC

Yeah...and might get with Sakura after all!!

sweet_iolanthe November 24 2008, 21:27:00 UTC

freaking fantastic.
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