Persistence, Part 19

Sep 21, 2008 08:33



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beurre_blanc September 21 2008, 13:41:22 UTC
Kapow!!! I'm speechless, actually - this has been an incredible journey: masterfully woven plotline, an extraordinary eye for characterisation and ear for dialogue, and a final twist which has the reader wanting to return to the beginning and read the entire thing again just to catch all the hints and nuances along the way.

A big round of appreciative applause for a job extremely well done!

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shatterpath September 21 2008, 14:35:52 UTC
Oh.

My.

God.

Seriously? That sneaky, brilliant, frightening woman...

This was MASTERFULLY done. You really did fool everybody. Well, you and Alex did anyway! The pacing was great and the epilogue left my jaw hanging. While I'll be sorry to not have the updates, I certainly loved the rollercoaster of this. Wheee!

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gemini1963 September 21 2008, 17:06:05 UTC
Wow, I wasn't expecting *that*. What a story, so well done. Thank you.

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gaviotademar September 21 2008, 17:08:48 UTC
OMG!....Amazing!!!!Alex a killer!!and Liv (poor Liv) was to blinded by Alex.
He he he!!Loved it!
I'm gonna miss this great story!
Thank you.

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theholyinnocent September 21 2008, 17:45:47 UTC
Congrats to you again for sticking with this and finishing it, sweets. It was fun to follow along again, and even though I knew that wicked turn was coming, still loved it--a real touch of brilliance there.

So good on you, and I really hope this jump-starts you back into writing on a regular basis again. :)

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