The Verdict's Out and It Doesn't Look Good

[displacdwarrior]

“Ang, you ok?”

She looked up into the smiling eyes of Hodgins and sighed.

His eyes still held obvious love for her despite the fact that she turned down his marriage proposal. He had been surprised to say the least, but she knew it couldn’t hold a candle to shock she felt when he popped the question.

She enjoyed spending time with him, and truly

Comments

[inlove_n_inhate]

Oh, you should fix it if your muse allows you to. The image of Angela's eyes meeting Temperance's during THAT kind of moment is just as heartbreaking as the last two lines. The entire story was filled with spectacular imagry. Loved her on the swing set by the ocean! Great story, but I wasn't expecting anything less. :-D