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snuffnyc in passion_perfect

FIC: The Lost

Dec 19, 2009 18:57

Title: The Lost
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Rating: R to NC-17

Notes: PLEASE READ This is a dark, angst-filled story with ADULT themes. It is not graphically violent or gratuitous in nature, but it can be quite dark. For those of you who read and enjoyed "Whatever It Takes," this story takes place shortly after. Completely different ( Read more... )

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jojolemon December 20 2009, 02:23:13 UTC

I'm also hoping this story just keeps going on and on and on.

aeryn112 December 20 2009, 02:26:48 UTC

when I saw there was an update I actually screamed out "Christ in heaven!!" lol... I was a bit excited;) anyways... another great chapter:) the thing that I love most about this story, and maybe I've said it before but, it's realistic. nothing ever sounds forced or misplaced or wrong. when I'm reading it's absolutely effortless to see it all playing out in my mind and I love that because that doesn't happen for me often. I'm a nitpicker who never has anything to nitpick at when it comes to this story. loved loved loved Olivia and Natalia imagining what the baby would've been like. so sweet and sincere that they were lightly sharing it with each other, that it wasn't heavy and sad and weighing them down... just fond "could've been"'s... oh I could feel my heart expanding reading that part. and of course the end:D who doesn't love smexy Otalia? lol just good stuff all around!

snuffnyc December 20 2009, 04:38:00 UTC

Thanks for always commenting. I do so look forward to what you have to say. :)

I'm really glad it flows for you. I love writing it... actually, it writes itself. I'm just here because it doesn't know how to post itself to the interwebs. lmao.

scotchnsoda December 20 2009, 03:25:55 UTC

I hope you write more about Natalia and Olivia practicing making babies. I love this story!

triggerhappy December 20 2009, 04:29:01 UTC

Update, whooo!

Such a good story, everything flows well; it all feels natural and not forced. Lovely writing.

kelltwomyn December 20 2009, 05:17:55 UTC

Looks like I missed two updates, but that's all good! I'm glad someone was able to break through to Emma..bitter does not work well for the Bean.

Natalia crushing on her teacher? Ah yes, I remember those days..good times. LOL..it makes perfect sense for her character.

Olivia calming down, listening to Natalia's breaths? So lovely. She is sooo in love with her woman..I love that. (romantic here, what can I say?) Talking about Isabella..awww... And you know, I think it's too sweet that Natalia wants to be knocked up by Liv!

Thank you for the update. Looking forward to more.