Life and Breath Part 15

[altfic]

Title: Life and Breath
Author: Pink Rabbit Productions
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Part: 15
Date: 20 July, 2009
Rating: Personally, I'd call it an R, but some might consider it NC-17 at some point.
Disclaimer: The characters and situations belong to other folks far wealthier, more important (or at least with better lawyers), and

Comments

[vjb2006]

Still really no idea who Mr Barron is and why he's so set on winding Frank up, but enjoying the interactions of Olivia, Natalia and certainly Evelyn!

[altfic]

Glad you're enjoying. Should be learning more about Barron in the not too distant future. :)

Thanks for writing.

[the_hero_factor]

Still no idea about Barron, but I like it.

Heh, Olivia was falling asleep in church. Cute.

I really liked Otalia's interation with Evelyn Fielding.

[altfic]

We'll be learning more about Barron fairly soon...hehe.

Glad you liked the bits in church. :)

[ndasky1]

Nat and Liv holding hands in church was awesome. Evelyn is wonderful and I'm glad she's on the girls' side.

Still no idea who Barron is or why he has it in for Nat. And my desire to kick Frank is growing by leaps and bounds. Well done! :o)

Looking forward to the continuation of this fabulous story.

[altfic]

Glad you liked the bits in church and Evelyn. Wanted to have them refuse to back down before Fr. Ray and let Natalia show a bit of a spine.

There will be a lot more revealed about Barron in near future. As for Frank...wanting to kick Frank just means you have taste and discernment...because honestly, he's soooo annoying.

Many thanks for writing.

[tabfan19]

Just dropping by to say I'm so enjoying this story.

But you're scaring the hell out of me with those Emma scenes! I just read chapters 9 through 15 (the only plus side of a long absence from fan fiction) and they are INTENSE.

As are the scenes between Olivia and Natalia, of course, in an entirely different, more pleasurable way.

This is a really interesting AU -- the double cross idea is VERY convincing. Of course, Frank is a dolt, which helps. And that Barron guy -- I'm pretty much AFRAID to find out what his deal is.

No surprise to see such great work coming from PinkRabbit. Thanks for sharing, and can't wait to see where this goes next!

PS: "Well played, madam, well played" on the LJ cut quote. :)

[altfic]

Glad to have you stop by. :)

Emma's gonna be okay. She's a smart cookie.

As for Olivia and Natalia...hehe...fun scenes to write. Glad you enjoyed.

More to be revealed about Barron soon.

Many thanks for the kind words. Always much appreciated. T'is good to know folks enjoyed the demented little trips through my imagination.

re: P.S. LOL! Glad somebody noticed.

[originaldreams]

No idea what's going on, but still enjoying the ride.

[altfic]

Some major reveals coming up pretty soon that should hopefully clarify some things. Glad you're enjoying. :)