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Life and Breath Part 10

Jul 05, 2009 18:42

Title: Life and Breath
Author: Pink Rabbit Productions
Fandom: Guiding Light
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Part: 10
Date: 5 July, 2009
Rating: Personally, I'd call it an R, but some might consider it NC-17 at some point.
Disclaimer: The characters and situations belong to other folks far wealthier, more important (or at least with better lawyers), and ( Read more... )

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Comments 25

mightbefound July 6 2009, 03:25:48 UTC

Frank's an idiot. How does he fit Rafe into this whole con man scenario?

Not to mention that Nat chose Olivia AFTER Olivia was not even close to dying...not to mention that the only reason Nat got involved there was Gus' heart...not to mention Gus vouched for her from their old life....

altfic July 9 2009, 21:12:18 UTC

*evil smile* More to be revealed soon. lol.

Thanks for writing.

zephyr_tempest July 6 2009, 03:28:40 UTC

Wow. This is so twisty it's like those bread ties they used to use. Definately looking forward to the next chapter. Soon.

altfic July 9 2009, 21:13:46 UTC

lol...with a few more twists to come.

Which is why it's probably a good thing that Olivia is herself a bit on the twisty side...in order to deal with these problems. :)

ladyvictory July 6 2009, 12:23:23 UTC

Oh Frank, this is not going to end well... Sorry buddy, you are just second choice.

Loved the last chapter as well (haha, Chuckles, priceless)!

altfic July 9 2009, 21:16:58 UTC

Frank...ooo, not even second choice. lol.

Glad you like the Chuckles bit because honestly, everybody who's ever been drug to one of those places by a kid has had THAT headache. lol. Thanks for writing.

lazydevil40 July 6 2009, 12:26:21 UTC

omg, I love this tangled web you are weaving... more awesomeness soon please?

altfic July 9 2009, 21:18:19 UTC

Well, I just posted the next part (took me a wee bit longer than planned, but it's up). Hope you continue to enjoy.

Thanks for writing.

kissmychakram July 6 2009, 13:55:52 UTC

Frank, proving a crime has been committed? Hahaha! Of course, this *is* fiction.

Really very intriguing plot, I'm utterly fascinated to see where you go with this. Thank you!

altfic July 9 2009, 21:32:52 UTC

Actually, I wholeheartedly agree. Frank could never prove a real crime. lol.

Here's hoping you continue to enjoy. Thanks for writing. T'is always appreciated.