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Otalia Ficlet: One Step Forward

May 10, 2009 01:14

Title: One Step Forward ( Read more... )

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ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:24:10 UTC

Haha, yeah, they need to pick up the pace a bit, it's been... months.

Thanks for reading! ^_^

wonkots42 May 10 2009, 09:34:27 UTC

that girl just seemed to wander off

Hahahahahahaha!

You go get your woman Nat. This was great.

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:25:56 UTC

Haha, seriously, Emma has a secret life.

Man, I think the writers on the show forget she's latina. What happened to the fire/passion?!

wonkots42 May 10 2009, 20:24:34 UTC

It's been smothered under the weight of what looks like pretty medieval Catholicism.

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 22:16:16 UTC

Indeed! Luckily, her heritage seems to be reasserting itself (ha, that talkin' to she gave Frank for example... well, the first part of it anyway).

luftig May 10 2009, 11:32:54 UTC

Ah, Tori Amos!

This was great! I love it when Natalia takes charge! Go, Nat, go!

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:27:10 UTC

Gotta love Tori Amos. ^_^

Take-charge Natalia always gets the job done. ;p Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! ^_^

hevjg86 May 10 2009, 11:36:35 UTC

hey loved this fic, maybe a series starter (hint, hint..)

Way to go!

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:28:47 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it, thanks for reading! ^_^

A series starter, ho boy, that's an idea. We'll see...

jen71dtc May 10 2009, 12:58:15 UTC

Excellent story! I love this version of Natalia, especially. I do hope you write more stories for this pairing--I think there is a lot that still needs to be told for them, and if this is any indication, you would do very well.

ladyvictory May 10 2009, 17:30:40 UTC

Aw thank you, you're so sweet. ^_^ Really, I just get frustrated and have to type, so, maybe if they keep up their teasing, I'll continue.

Thank you for reading, I'm so glad you liked it. ^_^