I so want Natalia to just go all out, go big or go home and just pursue Olivia and break her down, kill her with kindness, just like this story illustrated so well..
LOL... Yes, that would be nice to see. But honestly, at this point... I don't think it would take much to break Olivia down... she's on the edge right now, and who wouldn't be after the what YEAR of angst?
Sigh... yes... today was VERY disappointing. I was glad to see them actually TALKING... but the direction of their discussion left a LOT to be desired...
When Frank showed up I was pretty much yelling at the screen... Olivia!.. Hit him over the head with it!
I totally wanted her to just say... This is why Frank!..Grab Natalia and kiss her because at that point I KNOW Natalia would just melt into it... :)
LOL... well thank you. I'm glad you liked it so much.
One of the things I do in my writing is write what *I* want to hear the characters say.. LOL... luckily for me most of the people who read my stuff want to hear it to. :)
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WANT. *waits for the TV to catch up*
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Glad you liked the story. :)
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::hugs you hard::
They almost broke me entirely today. HBM was in danger, even. (It's not now. Don't worry. I'm off the ledge.)
This story? Makes me very happy. Thank you!
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When Frank showed up I was pretty much yelling at the screen... Olivia!.. Hit him over the head with it!
I totally wanted her to just say... This is why Frank!..Grab Natalia and kiss her because at that point I KNOW Natalia would just melt into it... :)
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I knew they'd drag out the angst... so I wanted something that ended happy or at least halfway resolved.
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“Don’t you understand? You make me happy. You Olivia, no one else.”
Why oh why hasn't that been uttered on the tv yet?? This was marvelous.
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One of the things I do in my writing is write what *I* want to hear the characters say.. LOL... luckily for me most of the people who read my stuff want to hear it to. :)
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Thanks for sharing.
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Glad you liked it!
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