drabbles; jaejoong/yunho | jaebeom-cen

Dec 25, 2009 10:44

fairytales;
(DBSK) Jaejoong/Yunho
pg, 171 words
fairytales derive from wishful thinking.

do you think we'll have a happy ending? )

character: jaebeom, fandom: dbsk, rating: pg, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: g, fandom: 2pm

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essyllus December 25 2009, 22:37:39 UTC
...I legit cried at this. :\ like, you know how other people say that they're crying to exaggerate their emotions? well i'm really not here... jay... T________T hahah it's really embarrassing (and now i have to lock the door so my parents don't come in lol) 'cause it's just a fic and i know that he's all right now, he's moved on with his life, and he's fucking 22 but that doesn't mean that like. he didn't feel this way, having to hold his emotions in, and his mother... it must have been so heartbreaking for his mother to watch her son go through that and the last line, it just evokes my maternal instincts and i really like how this fic makes you feel not only for jay, but for his mother as well. you did an absolutely great job with this. :( ♥ it's not cleverly written, it doesn't use any pretty language, but it does something that a lot of fics don't do and it's to make me feel because it's so true. T_T

also, i really liked your yunjae piece, which is surprising for me because i usually don't read that pairing. :)

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skystreaked December 26 2009, 17:04:28 UTC
sdklfj aww don't cry D: thank you for crying, though? lmao /bricked
EXACTLY dsflj screaming, i can't reply back to pretty comments like this because they just make me keysmash endlessly with nothing coherent to say back ):

...gdi i was trying to make it clever with the similar lines in both of the two parts, but w/e IT'S OKAY BECAUSE YOU LIKED IT :D

thank you ♥♥

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freefallskyline December 25 2009, 23:20:31 UTC
the jay piece hurt to read, because i can imagine it happening like this - jay hiding away how he feels, and his mother just worrying, wanting to make it better and dlfgkjsdfg thank you for writing this ♥

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skystreaked December 26 2009, 17:04:45 UTC
sdlkfjs thank you for reading it ♥

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hwaitings December 26 2009, 06:32:37 UTC
god i seriously cried after reading the jaebeom piece :( i could see it all in my head---jay hurting, his mother trying to be there for her little boy and asdlfkjl :( and that last line = beautiful.

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skystreaked December 26 2009, 17:05:06 UTC
lmao your icon is so adorable ): thank you so much!

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skystreaked December 28 2009, 00:25:45 UTC
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT I'M ON RIGHT NOW

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music3chick December 27 2009, 19:42:55 UTC
*wipes tears away*
:| hate chu, jkjk

you know, you get so focused on 2PM/Jay that you sometimes forget about how his family must be feeling. If something like that happened to a child of mine (eventhough, I'm not a mother right now) I wouldn't know what to do.

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skystreaked December 28 2009, 00:27:02 UTC
eek D:

I know right? I was thinking to myself like, how would his family feel about this, because they don't really know the rest of 2pm like he does, so they really don't know how he really feels.

thank you ♥

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