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Into the Fold, Chapter Six

Oct 25, 2006 20:28

Title: Into the Fold
Author: Pasi
Category: Gen
Rating: PG-15
Summary for the Fic: Severus Snape is going straight to hell. The people he calls his friends are helping him get there.
Summary for Chapter Six: A spell cast in anger has its consequences.
A/N: Beta: Anne. Beta-britpickers: Lyras and Panamdea. Thank you!

Chapter Index

( Chapter Six: The Firewhip )

into the fold

Comments 8

pervert_bitch October 26 2006, 17:43:03 UTC

Mmm, every time you post an update to this I want to beat up marauders... all of them.
Damn.
Keep going.

pasi October 26 2006, 22:11:07 UTC

Severus's opinion of MWPP is not improving, either *g*. Thanks for the encouragement; the next chapter is in the works.

a_t_rain October 27 2006, 23:54:28 UTC

Nicely done, and, I think, a reasonable extrapolation from what we see of the dynamics in OotP. It's a rare treat to find a fic author working from Snape's PoV who addresses his own culpability in the whole situation (even if he can't see it) and doesn't let either side off easily.

pasi October 28 2006, 10:45:48 UTC

Thank you for your insightful review.

...working from Snape's PoV who addresses his own culpability in the whole situation (even if he can't see it) and doesn't let either side off easily.

Exactly what I was trying to do. I am so glad it came across in this chapter.

riibu December 16 2006, 20:07:02 UTC

I like parallels between this and Snape's Worst Memory chapter in OotP. It's nice that you gave Pettigrew so much "screen time". He's so often neglected in MWPP stories.

And the mention in the beginning that chocolate makes Snape feel good! I wonder if that's also because chocolate is good against the effects of Dark magic with which he's experimenting...

pasi December 18 2006, 13:54:21 UTC

Peter was MPP's friend, and I don't think it was just because he was James's sycophant.

It's very clear that Severus needs chocolate. Badly. (*g*)

sophierom February 16 2007, 13:02:30 UTC

I'm finally catching up!

I loved that moment when Pomfrey asks where Snape learned the curse. I could picture him looking into her eyes and telling her that he'd invented it. And then, when he says he invented the countercurse, as well ... What a lovely metaphor for Snape's ability to be both destructive and constructive.

I also liked the way you handled the Marauders. Reading from Snape's point of view, I certainly didn't like them ... but I could also see their friendship with each other and Lupin's struggle with being both decent to Snape and loyal to his friends.

Oh, and Ruskin! Gave me chills considering what you have in store for him in A&A.

Great work, as usual!

pasi February 16 2007, 20:36:27 UTC

Thank you, glad you enjoyed the story.