The More Things Change: Chapter Eight, Part I

[pasha2009]

Title: The More Things Change

Rating: T

Summary: “Hours later Callie felt her best friend slip away silently into the cold and inexorable night while they were all still trapped amidst the wilderness. She held onto him, tighter now; somewhere a slight distance away Kepner was being mauled by the sinister gifts of the wild.” In a world where

Comments

[elledee68]

Really enjoying this!
The intensity with which you write the emotions involved is amazing.
But.....WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?!!!!!!

[pasha2009]

Thanks! I know, whenever I sit to write it, I think I'll be short and crisp and economical. But alas, it took me 3pgs in the next chapter to get them to sit down at the diner! Which is why writing what happened is a drawn out process. Have finished chapter 8, part II. Will publish soon.
Also, sorry for the length of the reply. I seem to be feeling chatty...