Oneshot: Inferno

[parvati_blossom]

Pain could not fully describe it, but he could not come up with something better due to his circumstances. He laid in a bed in an unfamiliar chamber and his body was experiencing the worst agony. There was fire everywhere. There were screams. There were pleadings. However, he could not recognize the voices. He wondered if he had suffered some

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[nyaza]

Those bodies would be his; his to kill, his to break, his to tear limb from limb… and his to drink until not even a drop of blood was left.

Edward has a possessive's problem lolz (i know u know what i mean LOLZ!) But that was *o*! I like how you played it... many people turn Bella, but noone focus on poor Edward! I love the answer of Carlisle to that too <3!

*goes back to study*

[parvati_blossom]

I've read some Ed's turning, but... they don't usually go deep into his feelings. It's rather difficult, because the desire of blood is the main thing in theory, but.. they are so unstable u.ú.

And yeah, my Ed is pretty possessive LOL. I think an instinctual!Ed would feel threatened by Carlisle's presence. After all, he's his sire. And he wants blood! LOL. I cannot imagine how Ed's first hunting was for both of them...

Thank you, sweetie! ^^

[nyaza]

I dont even like sometimes Bella's turning cause they are always forgetting that... blood!That's why I really like yours <3!

I think Ed is possesive, not just yours! Yours shows it LOLZ! That should be an interesting idea... wanna try? =P!

^O^!!!

[parvati_blossom]

Yeah, I think most people think Bella will be unaffected by blood because she chose to become a vampire... but I don't think so. Blood is vital for vampires. Even if she didn't crave for human blood, she would for animal blood. It's the same process. Maybe she would not have the memory loss Ed had in my drabble, but she would not feel instantly alright.

I love Ed LOL. That's the problem: "I cannot imagine them!". Maybe when I go to bed, they will come and tell me how... it would be interesting, right? LOL. Probably Ed would misstep in his diet. Poor Carlisle so disappointed! I'll try.

[lovesweetestsin]

my, my...that was great.
no, amazing. I could picture it.
your writing is wonderful.
man, poor Edward ! :( it makes me wish I could reach in and give him a hug.
haha. not that he'd appreciate that very much, what with how he's feeling.
but really, you know these characters well and just wow I don't know what else to say.
nicely written. ;D

[parvati_blossom]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. English is not my first language, so I feared I wouldn't be able to write any of these drabbles properly.
Indeed, I don't think he would appreciate it LOL, the smell of blood would drive him insane, probably. And kill you.
I just try to... let them guide me, and not the other way around; let them talk and feel, and do not push them. I'm crazy, I know LOL
Well, thank you so much!