NejiSasu is a pairing I rarely -- never -- read, but I liked this. This piece contains your witty humour which I really like because it's subtle, but at the same time hard not to miss. And it's charming.
I liked the wording you used here as well and how you structured your sentences. I like how easy this was to read -- not because I'm linguistically challenged, but because it worked for the piece.
I like your characterization. They're both themselves and no one's OOC. The bickering and interaction was nicely handled as well. I like how your Sasuke was prissy and a bastard. I love him best like that.
And the ending made me laugh. Very nice, lovely work (and this review sucks, but I hope you'll be assured that I liked it).
Rest assured, I'm now blushing like an idiot. I wonder what I did that I'm able to read nice comments like these.
Humor comments are more than well-loved. Thank you!
... If you're linguistically challenged, I wonder what I should call myself. >.>
But, really! I'm glad that it was easy to read. I never want to go for far too complex because when I re-read those kinds of things, I often forget the subliminal messaging that's been put in them.
IC (as much as possible) in AU! This, I suppose, was the comment of yours that struck me the most. To have been able to do that... I feel really happy.
No, no. Your review didn't suck at all. I mean, I mean, it might from your point of view, but it doesn't for me. I never have thought that any of your reviews suck. They're really all very lovely!
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I liked the wording you used here as well and how you structured your sentences. I like how easy this was to read -- not because I'm linguistically challenged, but because it worked for the piece.
I like your characterization. They're both themselves and no one's OOC. The bickering and interaction was nicely handled as well. I like how your Sasuke was prissy and a bastard. I love him best like that.
And the ending made me laugh. Very nice, lovely work (and this review sucks, but I hope you'll be assured that I liked it).
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Humor comments are more than well-loved. Thank you!
... If you're linguistically challenged, I wonder what I should call myself. >.>
But, really! I'm glad that it was easy to read. I never want to go for far too complex because when I re-read those kinds of things, I often forget the subliminal messaging that's been put in them.
IC (as much as possible) in AU! This, I suppose, was the comment of yours that struck me the most. To have been able to do that... I feel really happy.
No, no. Your review didn't suck at all. I mean, I mean, it might from your point of view, but it doesn't for me. I never have thought that any of your reviews suck. They're really all very lovely!
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