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Walking a Mile in His High-Top Sneakers
SHINee - Onkey
3470 words; PG-13 for cursing, I think
Kibum's not used to being the chaser and not the chasee.
For phasera and noelliex. Thank you so much for all the help, and for putting up with my whining this whole time! I'm still not satisfied with a lot of this, but at least it's done for now...? :D/
( Walking a Mile in His High-Top Sneakers )
SHINee - Onkey
3470 words; PG-13 for cursing, I think
Kibum's not used to being the chaser and not the chasee.
For phasera and noelliex. Thank you so much for all the help, and for putting up with my whining this whole time! I'm still not satisfied with a lot of this, but at least it's done for now...? :D/
( Walking a Mile in His High-Top Sneakers )
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And yeah, ngl, I would totally be willing to drop EVERYTHING to snuggle with Onew for just a few minutes. :%Pr
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He’s using his patented Wake-Jinki-Up Voice, honed after months and months of practice. It makes him sound all tender and sappy.
He knows the exact moment Jinki wakes up, because his body jerks a little and his nose scrunches up in a grimace for a split second.
♥♥♥♥♥ i feel key's pain with waking people up. i really do. BUT THIS IS ADORABLE.
he suddenly realizes he can’t remember the last time Jinki tried to hug him.
:( this is not so adorable. i believe it's what a normal person would call depressing. sob.
“I’m going to go over there and kick you in the face if you don’t stop that,” Kibum seethes, and stabs the Enter key on his keyboard with a finger to punctuate his point.
i like how his first reaction is not to take the ball away, but to kick him in the face.
It’s wrong, all wrong, because it’s an Onew smile, not a Jinki smile. It’s the smile Jinki falls back on ( ... )
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XD; I'm not satisfied with the wording of a lot of things, they just feel very awkward to me. :( But I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥ Thank YOU for leaving such a nice commenPr
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Come back to the dark side! It's so much fun over here. :D/
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked this. &hearts%Pr
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maybe or just maybe this is happened ritualy at shinee dorm
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;~~~~~~~~; god why are they so precious?
YOU PUT KISSING IN I AM SO PROUD OF YOU, PRIS, SO PROUD. *______* needs moar tongue tho. And it was adorable.
“I did!” Jonghyun protests, waving his apple in the air emphatically, “I so knew.” At Kibum’s raised eyebrow, he amends, “Okay, so maybe Minho had to tell me about it. I totally noticed that you were acting like a moody little bitch, though.”
lolol forever at jhyun being clued in by minho. you SO know that's how things go down irl. XD
i love the end going back to the beginning with the waking-up and the asdjkshdhs snuggly CUTENESS.
Kibum can feel a smile tugging at his lips, and tries to bite it back. It doesn’t work.
I feel like this is probably Key's default reaction to Onew Condition pretty much 24/7. ^___^ ♥
*throws confetti at you* YAY YOU FINISHED~~~~ AND IT'S SO CUTE AND AWESOME AND JUST GENERALLY..... GREAT. :DDDD/ You are a winner, miss.
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Bling would totally be like, "Huh. Kibum's acting weird. Jinki hyung's acting weird. That's.... weird." And then Minho would just be all long-suffering sigh and go, "Yes, but do you know WHY they're being weird?"
I AM STILL NOT HAPPY WITH IT. :((( I only posted it because I promised you I would and I was so sick of looking at it and I needed to get it out of the way. I was half-asleep when I posted it and was all I CAN'T EVEN TELL IF THIS IS OKAY ANYMORE.
But thank you, bb. ♥ I really appreciate all the help and cheerleading and handholding and suggestions!
... Why do I keep getting this weird "%Pr" thing at the end of my comments. What is this wtf-ery. DDD%Pr
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