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[parsnip_chan]

Wrote a little one-shot of Shunsui-Nanao. It's a little dry I think, not as amusing as I had hoped, but my first fics usually are. Meh. At least this got me thinking about it ^_^

Title: A Change of Situation
Genre: General with a hint of flirting
Disclaimer: Bleach will never be mine, sadly.
Summary: Nanao is forced to change divisions upon

Comments

[ouatic_7]

I liked it but I have a couple of questions.

Did Nanao clock Shunsui or just shove the book into his middle with enormous force or is that left to the reader's imagination?

Why is she planning to tally Shunsui's discretions? To prove to herself that he can be discreet?

[parsnip_chan]

Nano shoved it into his middle since he didn't exactly give her enough room to clock him in the head. I saw this happening in my head, just forgot to write it down. Whoops...

It's all fixed now, and I don't know quite where you got the idea she was tallying his discretions. Hopefully the new ending clears that up regardless.

And thanks for liking ^_^

[fluorescens]

Eeeps! I like i like!! *jumps up into the air*
But the ending was a bit vague though... if you flesh out the last part a little, post in on kurosaki_clinic!!

[parsnip_chan]

eh, you know my penchant for rushing endings! Hopefully, this makes more sense. Meh.

And nah, I was going to post it at shunsui_nanao instead. I figured it's more apt ^_^ I guess I could do both. I just hate flooding people's flists.

[fluorescens]

Read the new ending! Good I say! Both are pretty IC, IMO that is...
Post away! And nah, spamming Flist with good fics/fanart is a good thing. :)

[parsnip_chan]

Except I still say this one lacks my usual flair. Meh. And thanks for the feedback like always ;p

[conri]

I enjoyed it! A little dry? Hm well, Nanao naturally tries to suck the fun out of things, but with Shunsui around, it is impossible.

[parsnip_chan]

thanks! Shunsui is a sweetheart isn't he? He's always there to liven up Nanao's life through irritation ^_^

[dark_malignity]

was she really an ex 3rd seat in 6th division? *curious*
and thanks for sharing! i enjoyed it muchly.

[parsnip_chan]

Granted, I've only read the manga and seen the anime once through, but to my knowledge we don't know anything about Nanao's past so I took literary liberties with this one.

And I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks.

[indie_not]

"Defensive Tactics"... how creative!

[parsnip_chan]

Thanks. It actually took me a while to think of a title for that book. You should have seen the first couple of choices...