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[parsnip_chan]

Well, I did it. I finished fluorescens Bleach one-shot! I'm not sure if it's necessariy all that good, and I know I twisted canon a little to suit my purposes, but I can live with that. Just don't know if anyone else can

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[fluorescens]

Ah~!!! Love love love it! Love the way you tried to describe hitsugaya's feelings towards hinamori; the possibly unrequited love, the glances, the suppressed emotions.... :))))
But heh you know, when I saw "Whitey-chan", I went O.o! (Shirou-chan sounds so much better, that's all! ;p) And I was thinking abt some Santa Claus somehow....
Im wondering what you will think when you get to see the later episodes... I think yr brain might go dead.
Memory-ing this! Post this up on ff.net!

[parsnip_chan]

Shirou-chan eh? Well...I am working off a dubbed copy here ^_^ My hearing for japanese isn't all that good. I hear greatings, salutations, matte, doushite, nani, hai, aa, ie, baka, temee (which they use ALOT in Bleach), and some other classics like youkai and miko ^_^

So...yeah. But I'm glad you like! I now know what you mean about how hard it is to write these characters. Their background stories are so complex and entertwined that you have to keep track of them all...

Meh. And I think my brain is already dead. So Many Names! I serioulsy need to rewatch this anime a couple of times before they'll sink in as you know every time I try talking about one with you ;p

And...do you think its good enough to post on ff.net? *ponders*

[fluorescens]

And oh, I want to add: the 'triangle' between hitsugaya->hinamori<->aizen<-gin<->rangiku is so damn good. I'll go think abt the one-shots u want and polish up my gin/rangiku ficlet....

[parsnip_chan]

Heh. It's 3 triangles in one! And that diagram is perfect! Except...it needs to come full circle back to Hitsugaya, but I"m not picky ^_^

And you only need to write one one-shot! Not all. Espcecially not the fma one. It was just a random pairing in case you were getting tired of Inuyasha or Bleach.

[fluorescens]

Hahhahaa, 3 triangles in one! I never thought of that.. but yes, it does make sense actually. And don't bother abt the FF.net reviews. There are pple who write Aizen/momo and these ficlets are well-received too...
Im going to write a Sess/Kag for you. Let me flesh out the plot a bit... :P

[parsnip_chan]

>_< Who's momo? You know I'm bad at these things! Although, I am learning ;p But yes, I'll let you flehs out the plot. *sits and waits*

Oh, yeah, I should be working on stuff. *scratches head* So...which one-shots am I supposed to be writing again? Kag/Sess is a gimme...but what else? You know the state of my brain! Er...laundry went to my head. Meh.

And am I detecting a hint of sarcasm to Aizen/momo there? HMM??? Heh.

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So can't wait for my new computer. *kicks old one* And lj's not sending me your comments! Bah.

*pouts and continues to wait*