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ptoridactyl September 17 2011, 15:25:02 UTC
I don't think I can express how much I love this universe. Just. ugh aksdfasdf
EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS BRILLIANT!!

I'm sad to hear you guys won't be writing anymore soon, but I love where you've ended it as well.

I don't know. I want to comment and say more about the characterisation (because God, everyone was so awesome and I'm so intrigued by this Mark and Mark/Eduardo angst and the h/c asfasdf) but I can't. I'm just. UGH. asdf

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thedeadparrot September 18 2011, 22:29:18 UTC
Wow, thank you! I'm so glad that you've enjoyed this series and this characterization! It's been pretty awesome trying to make the TSN characters work as criminal masterminds (though it's not that hard, to tell the truth).

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celestialteap0t September 17 2011, 23:45:25 UTC
I WANT TO WRITE FANFIC FOR THIS FANFIC. THAT'S HOW GOOD IT IS. I LOVE IT AND THIS ENTIRE UNIVERSE.

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thedeadparrot September 18 2011, 22:29:44 UTC
THANK YOU. :D I'M REALLY FLATTERED.

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phoebe14326 September 18 2011, 04:35:18 UTC
What!? No!!! I wish you don 't stop write this AU. I love this AU and i love your writing. I can't help but wondering,did Eduardo fuck someone else beside Mark in the condo?

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thedeadparrot September 18 2011, 22:32:48 UTC
I'm glad you've been enjoying it, but I think we're pretty much out of new ideas for stories, so I think this is a good place to end things. I don't think we're going to leave it behind completely, but I don't think we're going to have the time and the energy to keep it going at this particular level.

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mowglimoonshado September 18 2011, 06:34:20 UTC
That was great. Mark pov! He comes off so differently here; still relentless and driven but far from aloof and distant. We finally really see that he cares as much as Eduardo does. He just fails at showing it at times.

Gorgeous ending. I really want to just beg you to never stop writing but everything in this verse is quality stuff so I can't complain. I know I will be rereading it often!

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thedeadparrot September 18 2011, 23:32:06 UTC
Thank you! It was really fun writing from Mark POV after everyone else got a chance to weigh in on what they thought of him.

I'm really glad you've enjoyed the whole ride!

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anonymous September 19 2011, 03:05:26 UTC
Oh. Oh, but this is lovely. My throat is all clenched up. Your characterization is heartbreaking -- they both feel so raw, struggling back towards each other. But what absolutely gets me is how present Boston is here, how you captured its personality and potential, how that bleeds into everything that Mark and Eduardo plan, everything they dream. It's gorgeous.

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thedeadparrot September 20 2011, 03:06:21 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad that the characterization worked for you! I spent a lot of time agonizing over Eduardo's emotional arc here.

And Boston is near and dear to me. I'm glad it comes across clearly!

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