Between Two Lungs (Sherlock BBC, John/Sherlock)

[thedeadparrot]

Title: Between Two Lungs
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC)
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~5000
Summary: Sherlock discovers one of his own kinks.
Notes: Written for kink_bingo and the "breathplay" square. Much love to M and zulu for the betas.

Comments

[ruyu]

Wow. Wow. LOVED THIS.

[thedeadparrot]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[shei]

This was INSANELY hot. And sweet. And perfect.

[thedeadparrot]

Thank you!

[gee_gaskarth_x]

That whole thing was beautifully written and I thought you had Sherlock's voice (both internal and aloud) absolutely perfect.

And then as well as all that, it was mind-meltingly hot. That's not even my kink but you just blew my brain apart. I especially loved Sherlock wants to trace the fading rings around John's wrists with his teeth because for some reason that was one of the sexiest lines I've ever read in fanfic, and actually made me shiver.

I loved everything about this, thank you so much for sharing ♥
*mems*

[thedeadparrot]

Thank you! Since this is the first time I've written Sherlock, I'm glad his voice rang true for you.

And I'm glad the kink worked for you, even if it's not yours. :)

[innocentsmith]

Gorgeously written and staggeringly hot. Wow.

[thedeadparrot]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[how_to_shine]

I love this....so well written and I love the start especially, how Sherlock realises.

[thedeadparrot]

Thank you!