Papier-mâché Mephistopheles

Jun 01, 2014 15:19

Title: Papier-mâché Mephistopheles
Pairing: Taoris
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, Tragedy, Mindfuck (?)
Warnings: Hover
Length: ~4.8k
Summary: The devil is nothing but a powerful figment of imagination.

(A/N: This was written for fleuers during the [sadly discontinued] Totaolly exchange. This was definitely one of my favorite pieces to write despite the ( Read more... )

g: tragedy, t: papier mache mephistopheles, p: taoris, g: angst, r: pg13

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snow_meow June 2 2014, 02:30:18 UTC
I am so totally confused in a way.

Is Tao the devil or he is alive because he made the deal with the devil?
Hence, Kris is still living because of his deal with the devil.

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parkourdeer June 2 2014, 06:06:34 UTC
ofc kris is still living uwu he's comatose otherwise he wouldnt be able to... keep dreaming that tao was there

tao is supposed to be a dream demon sort of thing uwu so hes not rly alive no

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thekookydough June 3 2014, 03:05:43 UTC
Your style of writing is bloody perfect.. I actually cannot with this holy crap.... Is Tao supposed to be some kind of creature that only appears in dreams or... But yeah your vocabulary and the imagery was amazing and this story needs more readers! My taoris feels have been fed well because of this fic! Good job!!❤️ "In a world teeming with lives, where no surface remains untrampled by something which fights for survival, wisdom is knowledge of when the ending should come. No story should go on forever until its feet drag, listless, on an empty sidewalk lined with the structures of decrepit memories, and fade as nothing but a colorless vestige of what once was a chromatic work of vivacity. These useless pages are not needed. ". How do you even..... Let me have your brain pls..

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parkourdeer June 4 2014, 01:17:12 UTC
cries let me just say that just reading the first bit of your comment made my day yesterday uwu thank you so much!

my brain really isnt all that much orz my gpa would certainly tell you that ;; but I'M GLAD THAT YOU WANT IT HUHU but yes i'm so happy you like my style of reading! it means a lot <3

(p.s. yes tao is supposed to be... something like a dream demon? its really up to you hes just a creepy thing that lives in dreams uwu)

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fleuers July 26 2014, 05:04:59 UTC
I was just going through exorelieffund and i saw ur url and decided to check out your fics
YOU WERE THE ONE WHO WROTE ME THE FIC FOR TOTAOLLY

OH MY GOD. i love it /LOVE/ it!! i think i wrote a pretty long comment (i hope) on the actual totaolly post
before the journal was removed because it deserves so much praise!!

thank you THANK YOU for writing this (i want to quote the whole fic jfc!!)

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parkourdeer July 29 2014, 21:16:36 UTC
djfaklfjdsklfjdksl yes i do remember your comment! i wanted to go back to it but the journal was deleted but it made me really happy when i saw it uwu

thank you so much for stopping by and commenting again!! i really appreciate it!

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anonymous April 14 2016, 19:26:15 UTC
This was perfection, I feel like I'm not even worth commenting this masterpiece, it's common feeling to feel bored to death and feel like our life is not worth living; but this is a very nice reminding that we're not living in novels. Drowning in these troughs will ultimately mean our downfall. Kris was too naive and stupid to see the truth beneath Tao's promises, too blinded by hope. What a pity it is...
Thanks you, I feel great when fics make me think :) real deep admiration for writers .

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parkourdeer April 26 2016, 18:29:48 UTC
ahhh i'm really glad my fic made you think <3 thanks for commenting!

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