Omloop Het Nieuwsblad

[parka_girl]

Title: Omloop Het Nieuwsblad
Pairing: Sylvain Chavanel/Heinrich Haussler
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This is not real, this never happened. I don't know them and this is all fiction. Made up stuff.
Author's Notes: Follows Volta ao Algarve. Beta by metafic

Comments

[amato]

yay part 2! even if I'm not sure the situation has got any better.

So your list must be getting a lot smaller now

[parka_girl]

My list is complete, except for the big bang thing I signed up to write. :D :D

yay part 2! even if I'm not sure the situation has got any better.
I know, right. I have more parts, obviously, hopefully the boys'll sort themselves out eventually. This one had been sitting in my google docs for ages, too.

[amato]

That's cool. The big bang thing isn't for a while yet is it? *does remember when it was meant to be finished*

LOL. I guess that depends whether they're feeling nice or not. I have a lot of stuff gathering dust at the minute.

[parka_girl]

Mine's not due until March, so I have time.

Well, I was half waiting on my beta and half ... just not posting?

[fanged_angel]

I'm getting a bit unoriginal with the reviews I leave you, but I don't know what else to say apart from how much I loved this. I loved pt1 as well, and this is a very fitting continuation.
It's beautiful, at times even painfully so. The undertones have a heartbreaking quality to them in a way that is subtle and powerful all at once.
You spin the threads that pull these two together so wonderfully. I love the little details that make this incredibly realistic: the communication barrier, the mentions of Sylvain's wife and of their teams...

Very amazing writing, once more :)

[parka_girl]

First off, awwww. Thank you so much! I know what you mean about feedback. I fail at it so much, but you did not fail!

I love the little details that make this incredibly realistic: the communication barrier, the mentions of Sylvain's wife and of their teams...
Second, thanks! I love the little things like that. But also, if you can believe it, only a few years ago I was like 'I hate writing about wives in fic' and then for some reason everything changed. I think it was because at some point footballslash fans were a bit nutty about wags and I was like 'well, that's not nice' and ended up writing fic with wives, etc. And now it's no issue to even mention them.

Anyway, thank you so much! I hope I keep writing them, you know.

[fanged_angel]

It just seems very hard to give the awesome reviews such fics deserve *gg

[parka_girl]

Oh, shush! Also ♥♥♥♥ Thank you.

I don't have a problem if people ignore wags and if, like with Danny Agger, I don't even know her name, I just work my way around it. I think you don't HAVE to use them and I'm fine with that, because it's all fiction. I just hate when people get uppity about it either way (either treating the wags horribly in fic or being offended that fic includes wags at all). But then again, I like het almost as much as I like slash ...

I hope you'll write more of this pairing because you do it beautifully :)
Again, thank you so much!

[giggling_marlin]

I should be working but I really couldnt resist when I saw this fic on top of my flist. It's very simple in a breathtaking way.

Loved it. *kicks self back to work*

[parka_girl]

Awww. Thank you! I would have replied to your feedback sooner, but I was doing work ;)

[yellowshoes18]

Yay, I'm very happy you wrote more. It's also amazing :) Poor boys, they do communicate very well though given they can't use many words

[parka_girl]

I hope I keep writing more, too! So glad you liked it. Thank you. :D

[charlottemay]

Very nice. I'm hoping you continue this. :-)

[parka_girl]

I'm hoping I do, too.

Thanks!