Felix Culpa, 2/5 (Sam/Dean, NC-17)

[parenthetical]

Title: Felix Culpa (Part 2 of 5)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Characters: Sam/Dean, Castiel, Ruby, Uriel, Bela
Disclaimer: Still not mine, sadly.
Wordcount: Approx 50k for the fic as a whole.
Betas: Much love and thanks to my beloved zooey_glass04 for beta-reading, and to the lovely gestaltrose for Ameripicking. <333
Notes: Written during Nano 2008. Set post-4.07 (It's The Great

Comments

[zooey_glass04]

STOP WRITING AWESOME FIC, CANNOT COPE.

I think this particular chapter is one of the best things you've ever written. It's so rare for the darker side of wincest to be brought to the fore, and it is really effective here. And being in love with the OTP, I am ridiculously glad of the awesome resolution sex which follows <3

[parenthetical]

Heeeeeeeee! *loves on you like whoa*

And thank you, darling, that means a lot to me! <333 It was realising what Bela's outside POV of their relationship would be and how interesting it would be to look at that which made me change this fic to wincest in the first place, to be honest (it started out gen for a few thousand words), so it makes me very happy that you like how it plays out here. :D

[earthquakedream]

This concept is just freaking AWESOME. Bela being halfway between two really bad things but Dean feeling sympathetic to her and oh oh, when she made him think that Sam was just with him because he felt guilty - that hurt. I'm glad Sam gets him so well. I can't wait for more of this! <3

[parenthetical]

Wooo, I'm really glad you're enjoying it! I've wanted to write a story where Bela escapes from Hell and comes back as something non-human for ages, so it was a lot of fun getting to explore that a bit in this fic. :D

Thanks for the lovely feedback!

[muffaletta]

Awesome chapter! Great job showing how the brothers' relationship could so easily be misinterpreted-heck, even they have a lot of trouble figuring it out. Loved the complicated but loving dynamic between the two and how they're so in tune with even the smallest nuance of each other. And Bela was so well written: not truly evil but wounded and desperate. Lovely job!

[parenthetical]

Thank you so much! I'm really pleased the way in which the boys' relationship was dealt with worked for you. And that Bela came across well - I find her fascinating, so it always makes me happy when other people like how I write her. :D

Thanks again!

[elise_509]

This is amazing - The whole idea with Bela is brilliant and dark and I love how you've utilized it to bring so many multiple issues to the fore - Sam's powers, Dean's time in hell, the shades of gray between good and evil, and their whole relationship. Such a fantastic story. I'm looking forward to reading more!

[parenthetical]

Oh, thank you for the lovely feedback! I'm really happy that you're enjoying the fic so far. :D

[parenthetical]

Oh, yay, thank you! I'm glad you like it. :D