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Felix Culpa, 1/5 (Sam/Dean, NC-17)

Feb 14, 2009 00:31

Title: Felix Culpa (Part 1 of 5)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Characters: Sam/Dean, Castiel, Ruby, Uriel, Bela
Disclaimer: Still not mine, sadly.
Wordcount: Approx 50k for the fic as a whole.
Betas: Much love and thanks to my beloved zooey_glass04 for beta-reading, and to the lovely gestaltrose for Ameripicking. <333
Notes: Written during Nano 2008. Set post-4.07 (It's The Great ( Read more... )

bela, wincest, supernatural, felix culpa, castiel, fic

Comments 17

muffaletta February 16 2009, 03:00:01 UTC

Terrific first chapter-I just love your writing! Such layered characterizations of the boys, with lots of angsty hurt and misunderstanding. Sigh....And I have to admit, I squeed just a little at Castiel's appearance. Just love the idea that he cared enough about Dean to tell him goodbye, just in case. And throwing Bela in there? Totally wicked! Can't wait for the next chapter...

parenthetical February 16 2009, 19:47:55 UTC

Oh, thank you so much for the lovely feedback! *glees* I'm really glad you like the characterisation of the boys here, as that's always the most important thing to me. :D And heee! I adore Castiel, so I absolutely had to make him part of my Nano novel this year. I'm glad you liked him here. :D

Thanks again!

damerel February 16 2009, 11:30:41 UTC

Bela?? Now that really blindsided me, but makes perfect sense now I think of it, not to mention the whole Hell connection/angle.

I love the relationship between the boys here: the awkwardness, the lack of trust, the guilt, all with the underlying love that's never gone away but can't be acknowledged right now. All this plus a case - oh, and Castiel! Coming to say goodbye, possibly. *sniffles*

This is fantastically rich and deep, and I simply cannot wait for the next part. *taps foot impatiently*

parenthetical February 16 2009, 20:09:13 UTC

Heee, thank you! :D I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far. Especially the boys, and Castiel. \0/ I hope you'll enjoy the rest!

Thanks again. :D

mangacat201 March 16 2009, 18:05:21 UTC

OH CRAP
(that was initial reaction to Bela's entrance)
Man, that one hit me like a sledge hammer... you FIEND you managed to ingeniusly distract us with all that resurrection town and angel pep talk mojo, that I completely overlooked the obvious. I mean.. DAMN...
Cat

parenthetical March 16 2009, 20:46:22 UTC

Heeeee! *fiendish* Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D