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Fic - Nature (Smallville)

Apr 15, 2009 21:34

Title: Nature by Paraxdisepink
Pairing: Chloe/Davis
Rating: 17+, my muffins
Word Count: 5,720
Summary: Post-"Eternal" blah blah blah whatdoyoudoinabasementcakes. All the cool kids are trying it.
AN: I can't blame anyone this time. Chloom is the pairing that should be dirtybadwrong, but just won't be.

( Grace and hope I'm sure are on the way )

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paraxdisepink April 16 2009, 23:03:35 UTC

Thanks :) !!

morwen_peredhil April 16 2009, 06:50:13 UTC

This is lovely and true to character and very, very hot. I'm thrilled that Chloe is finally getting the orgasms she deserves!

paraxdisepink April 16 2009, 23:02:58 UTC

Thank you!!! I'm pretty sure there are more orgasms to be had heh Davis was like sent from Krypton to get Chloe off.

vodooman April 16 2009, 07:25:03 UTC

omg!!!that was billiant and totally hot!! naaahhhaaaa no wonder you rated it R...

me thinks i have another favourite for my chloom collection... heheheheehe... I am kind of happy that Clark did something idiotic... or else chloe and daivs wouldnt have been able to test their theory of her holding back the beast inside of him...

what do you think doomy inside thinks of chloe... probably either a) she is mine now or B) have to kill her to get out...

paraxdisepink April 16 2009, 23:59:58 UTC

I am kind of happy that Clark did something idiotic... or else chloe and daivs wouldnt have been able to test their theory of her holding back the beast inside of him...

At least they can do hold it off while Clark's not actually in the room. Left myself a little loophole there hehe :)
what do you think doomy inside thinks of chloe...

hehehe that almost begs for a parody. If D oomy's male and not an "it, he's probably enjoying the show

Thank for reading :)

vodooman April 17 2009, 05:01:32 UTC

lol... so he's more of a peeping-tom !lol!!!

eternal_moonie April 16 2009, 08:01:08 UTC

Awesome story! I loved it!! And a lovely joke!

paraxdisepink April 16 2009, 23:01:10 UTC

Thank you !!

and heh I once had a friend who wrote "If I were Persephone I'd gladly swallow all your seeds" in a fan letter to the guy who played Hades on Xena. It still makes me laugh 10 years later.

capriciouswind April 16 2009, 12:53:41 UTC

I wish you wrote for the show. I reallly do. The relationship between Chloe and Davis is so complex, compelling, and yes disturbing, and you capture all of it brilliantly..... Davis and his internal conflict between reconciling his monster with himself and Chloe, giving into her desires and needs, even when she knows them to be wrong.

I also adored the last paragraph. The hazy dreamlike state you left them in - where they could pretend for just a little bit longer in bliss.

And my god, my computer was scorched with the hotness of those two. I think I may have to leave my husband for you fanfic.

paraxdisepink April 17 2009, 00:03:30 UTC

LOL poor Mr. Capriciouswind! Just remember, he doesn't kill people!

The lovely thing about Chloom is that it should be creepier than it is. Maybe it's because Davis' love for her is so pure, or maybe because this is SV and the circumstances are so far-fetched I have difficulty getting all morally riled up about them, but Chloom weirdly fits, because wrong or right, people I think will do whatever helps them cope.

Thanks :) :)

capriciouswind April 19 2009, 02:24:25 UTC

Hmm. You may have a point. I won't leave him yet. :p

Chloom should definitely be creepier than it is. It really is a shame that the first truly compatible male (aside from Clark on his good days) for Chloe happens to be a tragic character. However, it is fitting with her previous track record in high school. She did manage to hook up with a few killers.

And I can not get "morally riled about" as well. Davis is so tragic, that you can't help but hope something good will happen to him in his life. All his life, he's been trying to fight against his inner monster - how can you not root for someone who honestly strives to be a good guy, despite his horrific childhood full of abandoment and tragedy?

Or maybe I just have a bad boy complex. Hmmm.

paraxdisepink April 20 2009, 19:33:05 UTC

Oh I know, the bad boys. My family would be relieved I'm not married if they knew what sort of menfolk intrigued me hehe

Davis deserves all the sympathy and compassion though and I can't help but love him. Sadly though, I think the only good thing that can happen to him realistically is to finally die for good and find some kind of peace.