Numb3rs Fic: Iridescence, 8/10 - Heart of Gold (David, Claudia, OMC, PG) (Color: Red)

[paranoid_woman]

Title: Iridescence, 8/10 - Heart of Gold
Word Count: 693.
Characters: David, Claudia, OMC.
Rating: PG.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: 2x12 - The OG.
Summary: Helping others is what helps David save himself.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Numb3rs.
Betas: The fantastic twins_m0m.
Previous chapters: Find them here.
Color: Red.

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[chymom]

Once again a great story. I like the take you have on David. He knows whats going on but instead of hiding and doing nothing to change it. He steps forward and helps kids that need some one. Sometimes if they want it or not.

[paranoid_woman]

Not many people write about David, so I thank the ones who have any stories related to him. He is a very responsible man and he likes to help people. He is a great character to write about.

Thank you. *hugs*

[magisterequitum]

CLAUDIA!!!

I miss her so much so you win huge points for bringing her back; biotch went and left David for Dexter and then Ugly Betty. But I loved her so much when she was on the show.

And I really love the way that you did David here because this is so true to who he is. Coming from rough neighborhood and getting out himself, it's only natural that he would try and give back and help kids that might not be as fortunate as he was.

Wonderfully done, PW.

[paranoid_woman]

I'd never written Claudia before so it was a great experience. Glad to know I won some points. ;)

It felt natural when I wrote it. David's words just came to me. He is a very kind man and there was no way for him to not try to something for this kid.

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. *hugs*

[lillyg]

David, always a gentleman! Nice story... I like the interaction with the kid and Claudia.

[paranoid_woman]

Always a gentleman, indeed. I think that is the heart of the matter here. I'm glad you liked the interaction. *g*

[devon99]

I think you have nailed David with this one. He does have a heart of gold, it shines through in the show, he's a good guy.

Really nicely done, but damn!! I was convinced you would choose red for Charlie, for passion and that great big heart of his!!

[paranoid_woman]

Thanks, hon... Like you said, he is really a good guy. *hugs*

I think no one's going to figure out what color I chose for Charlie. I'm not even convinced it's a real color itself. *frowns* But it works in the story I wrote for him, so... we'll see what happens on Thursday. *hugs again*

[shanachie_quill]

Aw I love this take on David and I adore that you brought Claudia and the youth center back. I wish both would return on the show! Can't wait to read the next installment.

[paranoid_woman]

I wish they were back, too... at least for a few chapters, you know. *sighs dreamily*

I should be updating tomorrow, if everything goes well. Thanks so much for reading...

[shanachie_quill]

*nods* I hear that.

Oh that's good. Hopefully I'll get to read it. I seem to forget to read things lately.