FIC: Iridescence, 5/10 - Unpacked (Nikki, OMC, PG-13) (Color: Brown)

Apr 28, 2009 09:35

Title: Iridescence, 5/10 - Unpacked
Word Count: 634.
Characters: Nikki, OMC.
Rating: PG-13.
Warnings: Drug use.
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Some stuff always remains unpacked; it’s just so tedious to her to dig into them.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Numb3rs.
Betas: The fantastic twins_m0m and the great lillyg.
Previous chapters: Find them here.
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numb3rs fic, genre: gen, character: nikki betancourt, series: iridescence

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chymom April 28 2009, 17:18:06 UTC
This is a good look at Nikki. Its like she is holding on to some hurt from the past and this could be a good luck at what it might be. Nikki reminds me of some one who's had a hard life but is making herself better. Thats what your writing shows her as to me. Its great thanks for sharing.

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paranoid_woman April 28 2009, 17:40:55 UTC
That's exactly what I wanted to say with this particular chapter. You got it all perfectly!

Thank you for reading, my dear. ♥

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magisterequitum April 28 2009, 17:49:04 UTC
This is interesting. We don't have much about Nikki, at least about her past. It comes across, at least to me, that she has had a rough past life, whether it is with having to grow up too fast or something like this that you've written.

Great job.

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paranoid_woman April 28 2009, 17:56:28 UTC
Good to know we agree. Like you said, we don't know much about her, so it was fun to come up with a past story for her.

Thank you!

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mustangcandi April 29 2009, 12:00:11 UTC
As always, a wonderful insight into Nikki's character. Poor her. This broke my heart.

Nice job as always!!!! :)

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paranoid_woman April 29 2009, 12:05:37 UTC
Thanks, hon! You're very sweet. Poor Nikki.

*hugs* :)

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devon99 April 29 2009, 19:17:10 UTC
Oh sweetie, so sad. You did a really nice job with this ♥

We are just watching Prime Suspect, you know the one with Ethan in. It's on tv. Charlie looks so young, in fact they all do.

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paranoid_woman April 30 2009, 00:13:18 UTC
It's amazing how much the characters have changed through the seasons. It's great to make comparison! *evil laugh*

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you very much. *hugs*

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rubynye May 12 2009, 22:28:27 UTC
This is so Nikki! This is absolutely, perfectly, indubitably Nikki. It explains so much about her character.

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paranoid_woman May 12 2009, 23:16:07 UTC
Hehe, thank you. Since we don't know much about her, it was fun to imagine her past. *g*

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