Comments | paranoid_woman: FIC: Clean and Unclean (Don, Megan, Crystal Hoyle, Buck Winters, Ian, R) (Sequel to Clean)

paranoid_woman

FIC: Clean and Unclean (Don, Megan, Crystal Hoyle, Buck Winters, Ian, R) (Sequel to Clean)

Apr 13, 2009 09:12

Title: Clean and Unclean (sequel to “ Clean”)
Characters: Don, Megan, Crystal Hoyle, Buck Winters, Ian
Word Count: 1,410.
Rating: R.
Warnings: Violence.
Spoilers: 3x01 - Spree and 3x02 - Two Daughters.
Summary: Crystal wants revenge. Megan provides some sense. Don must find a way to see the light.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Numb3rs or anything related ( Read more... )

numb3rs stand alone, character: crystal hoyle, numb3rs fic, character: megan reeves, genre: gen, character: don eppes

Comments 11

lillyg April 13 2009, 13:01:07 UTC

Very metaphysic hon!

paranoid_woman April 14 2009, 13:00:37 UTC

That's what I was going for. Thank you for keeping up with me when we talked about this particular plot bunny. It's awesome to be able to talk to you. You, my friend... you rock.

lillyg April 14 2009, 13:01:30 UTC

LOL! It's because you rock too!

magisterequitum April 13 2009, 15:36:36 UTC

This is fantastic.

It's very hard to do a dream/hallucination scene and make it so real and so believable.

Really. Fantastic job.

paranoid_woman April 14 2009, 12:59:45 UTC

Honestly, before writing this story, the scenes looked very good in my head but I didn't know if the words would sound strange or ridiculous. I kind of let myself go and tried to make the fic look real.

I'm glad it worked for you. Thank you for the kind words, hon... Your opinin is very important to me. :)

callsign624 April 15 2009, 16:29:54 UTC

Wow. Scary.

Great sequel... :)

paranoid_woman April 15 2009, 16:32:41 UTC

I'm glad you found it good. I was a bit worried about the hallucinations, it's great to know they worked well.

*hugs* Thanks for reading, sweetie!

devon99 April 15 2009, 19:13:48 UTC

Ooh, I so wasn't expecting that at all. I was convinced it would be Charlie or Alan checking to see if Don was okay, not a cathartic dream.

It makes sense to me that all of the agents would have things playing on their minds, dealing with the horrors of their job, it's a wonder they aren't all psychological wrecks.

Nicely done sweetie.

paranoid_woman April 15 2009, 19:38:16 UTC

I'm glad I could surprise you. I really think that my job with this fic is done. :)

Thank you for reading, you always make me smile...

rubynye April 15 2009, 22:37:39 UTC

Wow. This is different and fascinating.

paranoid_woman April 16 2009, 01:10:28 UTC

Thank you. That's exactly what I wanted. *g*