FIC: Outsider (Don/Robin, R)

[paranoid_woman]

Title: Outsider
Characters/pairings: Don/Robin.
Word Count: 1,106.
Rating: R.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: Season 2, 4 and 5.
Summary: Her dark hair looked just right against the pale blue of his pillow as he went to catch her mouth.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Numb3rs or anything related to it.
Betas: The fantastic twins_m0m and the great lillyg
A/N: Another story

Comments

[chymom]

Another great story. Thanks for sharing.

[paranoid_woman]

Thank you for reading. :)

*hugs*

[emmademarais]

Wow, that really did grow! Look authors! Water your little N100 drabbles and they grow into big fic! LOL

Lovely Don/Robin. Always nice to see them together. /sigh/

[paranoid_woman]

It did grow. I just couldn't make the story fit a 300-word drabble. *sighs*

Thank you very much for reading, Emma. *g*

[magisterequitum]

This was really interesting (not code for bad!). I liked the balance between the sex/romance with what was going through Don's head. And the fact that you had Don not saying it back is 'him'. It would be hard for him to say that, not because he doesn't love Robin, but because he doesn't want to mess anything up.

I love this. Fantastic job, PW.

[paranoid_woman]

LOL... For the record, it'd be all right if you told me it was bad anyway. I like it that you found it interesting. I couldn't make Don say "I love you" back, it didn't sound like him, at least not in this particular situation.

Thank you for your support. It means a lot. :)

[devon99]

Damn it Don. You made me want to shake him here.
There's Robin, laying it all on the line, physically and emotionally and still he won't just let go and say the words back.

*rolls eyes*

Men!!

You got me reading Het again!!

I enjoyed this very much. Some nice lines and I especially liked the clumsyness of the sexual side of things, knocking into the door, falling off the edge of the bed. Made it feel more realistic.

Nice work:)

[paranoid_woman]

Haha. I think it'd be very hard for him to say it, especially when he hadn't seen it coming. ;)

But you're right. Men!!

It's always an honor to find out that you enjoy my het stories, too. The clumsyness came to my mind and I couldn't let it go.

Thanks so much for reading... ♥

[callsign624]

I laughed when Don hit his head. :D That really kills the mood... (my mood, at least :P) But then I want to smack his head for not saying 'I love you' back. But he's like that so... *shrugs*

Nice story... :)

[paranoid_woman]

LOL, I know. It kills the mood. I found it funny. Haha.

It would never be easy for him to say it back. *sighs*

Thank you... *sends hugs*