Comments | paranoid_woman: Drabble: Crime Playground (Liz, mention of Cam, PG-13)

paranoid_woman

Drabble: Crime Playground (Liz, mention of Cam, PG-13)

Mar 24, 2009 08:49

Drabble: Crime Playground
Characters: Liz, mention of Cam.
Word Count: 300.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: 5.16 - Cover Me.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Cigarettes and confidence are a very bad combination.
Written for: numb3rs100, Prompt #64 - Smoke and March Montly Theme - Games.
Disclaimer: I don't own Numb3rs.
Beta: The fantastic twins_m0m.

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numb3rs fic, genre: gen, numb3rs drabble, character: liz warner

Comments 11

rubynye March 24 2009, 12:14:57 UTC

Oh, Liz. Next time I see that episode this will echo through my memory.

paranoid_woman March 24 2009, 14:19:34 UTC

The image of her smoking - I just couldn't let her go. For some reason I kept writing stories about it in my head. Thank you for reading! *sends a big hug*

magisterequitum March 24 2009, 14:42:32 UTC

This is a really good tag to this episode. It speaks of Liz and what she went through and how crafted or skilled she was in playing this game.

paranoid_woman March 24 2009, 23:04:41 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I just had to get the bunny out of my head. Thank you for giving it a chance. *sends hugs*

shanachie13 March 24 2009, 22:21:36 UTC

Awesome job, hun!

How's everything else? Things have been crazy busy...I need to drop you a line...maybe this weekend.

paranoid_woman March 24 2009, 23:05:35 UTC

Thanks, hon...

Things are okay, nothing new really. :S

You can contact me whenever you want! *hugs you tight*

shanachie13 March 24 2009, 23:08:45 UTC

All right as long as things are trucking along.

Yeah...I need to get some work stuff done and play catch up, then I'll carve out some email time. *hugs you tightly*

jelsemium March 28 2009, 23:23:42 UTC

Excellent drabble! You really did a good job portraying Liz in that situation.

The story felt so much longer than 300 words. A testament to your skill at packing so much characterization into such a small space. :-)

paranoid_woman March 29 2009, 00:33:19 UTC

Thanks, my dear. You're definitely too kind. I think that it could have felt longer because of the detail of what she's thinking and what she's doing. :)

*hugs* Thank you for reading...

emmademarais April 2 2009, 08:44:38 UTC

Ooh!

I like this trip into Liz' head in that episode. I don't think people write her enough from a psychological viewpoint.

Nice choice!

paranoid_woman April 2 2009, 12:50:46 UTC

I don't think people write her enough from a psychological viewpoint.

That's exactly the point. *nods* I had to write this, I had to see what was going on inside her head.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! *g*