FIC: Holding on to a lie, Part 21 (Colby/Charlie, Amita, Liz, Ian, Alan, Don, OMC, R)

Oct 21, 2008 17:33

Title: "Safe from harm"
Series: Holding on to a lie, Part 21
Characters: Colby/Charlie, Amita, Liz, ian, Alan, Don, OMC.
Rating: R for violence.
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Amita really knows how to use a knife.
Feedback: I love it, yay! :)
Disclaimer: I do not own Numb3rs or anything related to it. But I do own any OCs.
Beta: The ( Read more... )

genre: slash

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byrons_brain October 22 2008, 18:17:53 UTC
Oooooooooooooh Amita is so evil! Just loving this story can't wait for more ::hides under bed::

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paranoid_woman October 22 2008, 18:28:51 UTC
Eeeeeeee!!! Thank you!!!

And if you liked this chapter, the next one will make you really shiver... *rubs palms*

Ah, if I'm good enough, I'll be able to keep the suspense until the last word of this series - I could even make you yell, but I'm not telling you why exactly. *g*

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byrons_brain October 23 2008, 09:21:55 UTC
UH OH!

::is scared::

::hides behind Ian::

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paranoid_woman October 23 2008, 11:33:39 UTC
::hides behind Ian::

Ah, any excuse is good to do that... I'd so love to hide behind him, too! *giggles*

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devon99 October 22 2008, 18:55:41 UTC
*hugs trembling Charlie* then *hugs you* for another awesome update.

Girl fight!!! Extremely cool. Your Amita is wonderfully deranged in this.

And awww poor Alan clutching onto the bannister trying to reason with her.

And only five chapters to go - lets hope everyone makes it out alive (well maybe not Amita )- blow her away Ian.

Look forward to more sweetie when you can x

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paranoid_woman October 22 2008, 19:31:07 UTC
Girl fight!!! Extremely cool.

I know!!

And awww poor Alan clutching onto the bannister trying to reason with her.

I just thought that would be so sad and so Alan at the same time. *nods*

blow her away Ian.

LOL! Hahahahaha.

I will have more soon. I can rest for while from two of my projects since this Saturday, even if I have two more exams soon, the first of them next week.

Thank you for reading!!!! Ah, I truly love your comments... *g*

*hugs you really tight*

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anonymous October 22 2008, 20:36:29 UTC
So Amita is still super woman. Someone has got to have some kryptonite on them to stop her (David, perhaps?). Great job! I'm looking forward to the last 5 chapters. It's been a great ride.

Twins' Mom

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paranoid_woman October 23 2008, 00:33:23 UTC
So Amita is still super woman. Someone has got to have some kryptonite on them to stop her (David, perhaps?)

I don't know, I don't know... *g*

Thank you so much for the ride - because you and the other readers have made this a ride for me, too, with all your wonderful support!!

*hugs you tight* Take care! And thank you!

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harknessgirl November 5 2008, 15:55:02 UTC
OMG OMG OMG OMG. Woman how is your mental state!!
Amita is so evil, I just want to go down there and kick her ass.
I really want Colby to save the day :-)
*runs eagerly to next chapter*

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paranoid_woman November 5 2008, 16:00:12 UTC
OMG OMG OMG OMG. Woman how is your mental state!!

MY mental state?? You should care about Amita's!! XD

You already know that I'm crazy and evil... :P

I really want Colby to save the day :-)

Mmm... I don't know if that will be possible. *evil laugh*

*huge hugs*

Thank you for reading!!

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mia_dcwut_09 December 20 2008, 18:52:52 UTC
wow is all i can say
dang i would love to this that happen in the show
amita and liz fighting that would be awesome

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paranoid_woman December 20 2008, 22:11:38 UTC
I thought it'd be cool to have that in a story, so thanks!! *hugs*

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mia_dcwut_09 December 21 2008, 14:15:51 UTC
i pictured it i was jumping in my seat

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