Numb3rs Fic: Define Me, 2/3 (Ian/Don, Jeff Upchurch, NC-17)

[paranoid_woman]

Title: Define Me, 2/3
Characters/Pairings: Ian/Don, Jeff Upchurch (SLASH)
Word Count: 1,136.
Rating: NC-17.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: All seasons.
Summary: A speech makes Ian hate this job.
Disclaimer: I don't own Numb3rs.
Betas: The awesome lillyg and the fantastic twins_m0m. I changed a couple of sentences before posting so any mistakes are mine anyway.

Comments

Author Speaking

[paranoid_woman]

This part was easier to write than chapter 1. It was still hard, though.

Again, many thanks to lillyg for going through this a thousand times and helping me fix the details. You are amazing.

Take care,

- PW.

[chymom]

Nicely done. Don/Ian is my weakness. This is not just about live with not sex. Nor. Is it about sex with no live. I love this! Thank you for sharing. *huggs and kiss*

[paranoid_woman]

Yeah, definitely. Thank you very much for reading. I'm glad you like Don/Ian... *hugs back* :)

[devon99]

Aww sweetie, what have you done to them. Both so broken in their own way, yet looking to the other to find something missing in themselves. They maybe need to talk and then actually make love rather than just have sex. They need an emotional bonding as well as a physical one. This felt lustful and needy, like they were trying to fix themselves, rather than connect with the other. Very nicely done indeed. I like these darker pieces from you. You write Ian really well. He's a troubled, complex Ian that I can believe in. Nice work:)

[paranoid_woman]

I have them broken here. So far, it's just sex tonight. Now we'll see what happens in the last chapter.

I have no idea when I decided to write this... I know it's dark and it highly depends on my mood whether I write a piece like this or not. But you know... it's Ian, after all. I have fun playing around with him. And Don is always a joy to write.

Thank you! :)

[writing_racoon]

Wow...

I may need a few minutes to become coherent again. LOL, this was a great chapter, another fab insight into one of my favourite characters. Keep up the good work!

[paranoid_woman]

I'll give you those minutes. Part 1 was about Don, Part 2 was about Ian... the last one will be published soon.

Thank you for the encouragement and support! *hugs*

[byrons_brain]

::shudders:: this is a wonderful story, so tender...

[paranoid_woman]

Glad you like it. It took me a long time to fix a lot of details, so it's good to know others are enjoying the final version of the story. :D