Comments | paranoid_woman: FIC: Fitting in (Donna, PG)

paranoid_woman

FIC: Fitting in (Donna, PG)

Jun 02, 2009 15:02

Title: Fitting in
Word Count: 200.
Character: Donna.
Rating: PG.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: 2x07 - Clean Hands.
Summary: Shooting a cop wasn't doing justice.
Written for: flashpoint_sru, prompt #4 Regret. Yes, I'm very much into that prompt at the moment, hehe.
Disclaimer: I don't own Flashpoint.
Beta: The great lillyg.

( Fitting in )

character: donna sabine, flashpoint fic, genre: gen, flashpoint_sru, flashpoint drabble

Comments 9

eviltwin June 2 2009, 18:20:31 UTC

Gah, poor Donna :( This isn't a character you see an awful lot of and I think you did a really good job at showing how she felt after that episode, and reflecting how the others might feel about her over it.

Excellent insight, hon. ~hugs~ (throw some of that inspiration my way, would you? I'm so stuck!)

paranoid_woman June 2 2009, 18:31:39 UTC

I'm into insightful fics, so... *g*

Thank you for the lovely review. Yes, Donna is a very tough character but I really think she's a vulnerable person inside. *hugs you tight*

throw some of that inspiration my way, would you? I'm so stuck!

Well... To be honest, I wrote this like a month ago... but I am inspired at the moment (finally!). The things is I have to wait a couple of weeks for the prompts to be out at the comm so that I can post. ;)

*throws a lot of inspiration - meaning the FP boys in their underwear - your way*

lillyg June 2 2009, 18:26:13 UTC

Too bad He had to be killed because I would have been very happy to see Peter Outerbridge in some other episodes...

Sends hugs to Donna to comfort her...

*PM to Greg: it's not because you don't see someone crying that they don't cry!*

paranoid_woman June 2 2009, 18:35:00 UTC

It would have been great to see him interact with Sam some more... *nods*

Donna will accept the hugs. Definitely.

*PM to lillyg: hell, yeah!*

paranoid_woman June 2 2009, 18:37:32 UTC

Better? *grins*

lillyg June 2 2009, 18:41:49 UTC

Strangely YEEEEES! No more creepy icon!

Thread 5

sagey1899 June 2 2009, 19:26:25 UTC

I'm not a huge fan of Donna's but I'm really getting to be a huge fan of yours! You did a great job with this one and really got into her head. I think it had to be really hard for her to take the shot, especially with how she was talking to Wordy. She acted like given the chance she would kill the guy they were guarding so to take out the person she felt was actually dealing out justice must have seemed like hell and now she gets to revisit it, and regret it, forever.

Well done!

paranoid_woman June 2 2009, 20:32:38 UTC

I didn't think Donna was so cool first, but then I warmed up to her. :)

*nods* I think it was very hard for her. It's like she's always running away from it somehow, even if she talks about her past... until this happens, and everything goes to hell.

*Hugs* Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment, sweetie!