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Dec 12, 2010 17:07

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tacuma811 December 12 2010, 17:15:55 UTC
Tezuka, if you need a dragon to kiss Fuji, I'll gladly play a dragon XD

Loved this chapter, because Tezuka is being awesome and walks into the water, ignoring two people who know much more about it! Finally he is taking real action to get Fuji back to life! Loved it! Also loved how the other dimension is falling apart <3 Shows the situation of the demon! Awesomecakes!
But the end, you just have to tease us, don't you?

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paranoid_fridge January 13 2011, 15:27:38 UTC
^^ To be honest, the dragon part wasn't planned for here. It just happened to write itself, and I found it nice enough to leave it like that (though to be honest, it doesn't make much sense <.<)

Tezuka is not the type to follow, especially if people around him aren't getting things done. And with Fuji's life on the line, he practically had no choice. But from now on, things will get better :)

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tacuma811 January 13 2011, 16:27:05 UTC
It was nice indeed. Things don't have to make sense as long as they are fun XD

Gosh, where did I hear that before. I'm like that as well. I hate it when people can't make a decision. Especially when it comes to important things. Decide already! XD;;;;;

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snow_meow December 13 2010, 08:26:48 UTC
Oh shit!! Where did Fuji send himself too or where did the demon send him?

I am glad that Tezuka decided to take charge finally and save Fuji.

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paranoid_fridge January 13 2011, 15:28:35 UTC
Fuji doesn't quite understand the place where he ended up himself. There'll be some talking on that in the next chapter, but explanations... might have to wait (once again).

For now, let's cheer for Tezuka! ^__^

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dark_kana December 13 2010, 08:52:18 UTC
Oh ... OH!!! Your ending!!! I want more! Give me more... XD

Love the fact that you let Tezuka take action, ignoring Yumiko and Nakayama. (loved the arguement between those two though. XD)
So the blood was also a gate. Interesting. xD

Can't wait for the next update!! :-)

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paranoid_fridge January 13 2011, 15:30:30 UTC
^__^ More is on the way already! (And with this the cliffhangers... are about to be over).

Yumiko and Nakayama might argue again in the future (they both have valid points. Just, as Tezuka noticed, that wasn't the time to discuss them). And those gates... Tezuka might have to do some thinking about them in the future.

Thanks for reading!

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jadeskye79 December 13 2010, 13:13:10 UTC
More... MORE!!! need more...

:)

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paranoid_fridge January 13 2011, 15:31:49 UTC
^__^ More is on the way!

thank you for reading and reviewing!

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neooldetokyo December 13 2010, 17:24:52 UTC
Hurrah! Hurrah!

I have thoughts but I'm not quite together enough to write them out. But <3

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paranoid_fridge January 13 2011, 15:33:04 UTC
the cavallery arrived Tezuka got himself together and took action. Let's go and cheer him on! ^__^

Thank you for reading, and if the latest chapters are a bit confusing, I apologize - I will try and have everything explained once the characters have time to sit down and talk. ^^

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