Comments | paranoid_city: Never Actually Said (Part One)

daisy_miller in paranoid_city

Never Actually Said (Part One)

Nov 03, 2006 11:06

Fandom: Life With Derek ( Read more... )

nas, life with derek, dasey, fanfiction

Comments 6

xliterati_pyro November 6 2006, 01:07:39 UTC

Aw, I liked this. The characterization was pretty spot on, I think. Looking forward to more. :)

daisy_miller November 6 2006, 21:11:37 UTC

You're the first person to even mention the characterization (I posted this on FF.net too) and I appreciate that very much. Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

rosedownmanor November 13 2006, 20:51:04 UTC

I agree with the poster before me that you did well keeping them incharacter. I also like your writing style it's very clear. Great job. I can't wait to see what other holidays you write for.

iheartlwd November 25 2006, 00:10:44 UTC

I liked this and i agree with the 2 other posters before me about keeping them in character please write chapter 2 soon

anduviel January 1 2007, 06:31:24 UTC

Haha looks like a hit on a head ade casey think of derek in new ways=)
Very nice, I'm gonna wait for next chapter ^^

- Anduviel

chocolatenhazel January 17 2007, 22:50:50 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWWW!!! So cute!!!

~Marisa~