baaaaaaaaaaaawwwwww.min19April 4 2009, 04:30:58 UTC
I sent a review on FFnet, but... my review got cut off... I mean, it's not necessarily necessary to continue but PRUSSIA/HUNGARY MAN WHAAAATTTTT WHY DO YOU KEEP THE AWESOME GOING. It's hard to handle sometimes. ;______;
The ending was the cutest thing in the world. Likeohymgod. All that trouble for such a simple objective ;w; d'aaawwwwwww
And is it bad that I cracked up when Prussia got totally owned by that frying pan 8|
It doesn't matter. Hungary's freaking manly anyways (manlier than the whole damn cast, for what it's worth).
I like how you characterized her, all hot temper but oddly sweet and maternal, as well as the raging yaoi fangirl that she is. You are a master of crack, by the way. I'm snickering like a thirteen-year-old right now.
A few small corrections though: "-where a few slivers of blood slipped out" - blood comes in slivers? Perhaps drops instead? "-vernacular diseases" - I think you mean "venereal"?
Oh wow, I love your fic. I think you got Hungary right on, as well as Prussia, who manages to be annoying, fun and pitiful at the same time. (And Hungary's fangirling... I lol so hard.) Awesome job, I hope you write more! ^^<3
(... um, sorry for asking this, but am I missing an irony here: ... ‘Ó Gilbert, miért nem fogsz szeress?’” he said in near perfect Hungarian... I'm so sorry, but I really don't get it. *nervous-nervous*)
oh wow just omg the characterization of Prussia and Hungary. Everyone. Was just so spot on. I really loved your Prussia voice, lol I wish there was more even!
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I mean, it's not necessarily necessary to continue but PRUSSIA/HUNGARY MAN WHAAAATTTTT
WHY DO YOU KEEP THE AWESOME GOING. It's hard to handle sometimes. ;______;
The ending was the cutest thing in the world. Likeohymgod.
All that trouble for such a simple objective ;w;
d'aaawwwwwww
And is it bad that I cracked up when Prussia got totally owned by that frying pan 8|
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I like how you characterized her, all hot temper but oddly sweet and maternal, as well as the raging yaoi fangirl that she is. You are a master of crack, by the way. I'm snickering like a thirteen-year-old right now.
A few small corrections though:
"-where a few slivers of blood slipped out" - blood comes in slivers? Perhaps drops instead?
"-vernacular diseases" - I think you mean "venereal"?
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The corrections have been made! (MS Word kept telling me that "venereal" wasn't a real word and offered up that suggestion. I took it.)
But, really, many thanks to you for your read and your help!
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Thanks for sharing~
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(... um, sorry for asking this, but am I missing an irony here:
... ‘Ó Gilbert, miért nem fogsz szeress?’” he said in near perfect Hungarian...
I'm so sorry, but I really don't get it. *nervous-nervous*)
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just omg the characterization of Prussia and Hungary. Everyone. Was just so spot on. I really loved your Prussia voice, lol I wish there was more even!
Excellent stuff *adds to memories*
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