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baaaaaaaaaaaawwwwww. min19 April 4 2009, 04:30:58 UTC
I sent a review on FFnet, but... my review got cut off...
I mean, it's not necessarily necessary to continue but PRUSSIA/HUNGARY MAN WHAAAATTTTT
WHY DO YOU KEEP THE AWESOME GOING. It's hard to handle sometimes. ;______;

The ending was the cutest thing in the world. Likeohymgod.
All that trouble for such a simple objective ;w;
d'aaawwwwwww

And is it bad that I cracked up when Prussia got totally owned by that frying pan 8|

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whitesin April 4 2009, 04:57:05 UTC
It doesn't matter. Hungary's freaking manly anyways (manlier than the whole damn cast, for what it's worth).

I like how you characterized her, all hot temper but oddly sweet and maternal, as well as the raging yaoi fangirl that she is. You are a master of crack, by the way. I'm snickering like a thirteen-year-old right now.

A few small corrections though:
"-where a few slivers of blood slipped out" - blood comes in slivers? Perhaps drops instead?
"-vernacular diseases" - I think you mean "venereal"?

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paranoia_pistol April 4 2009, 10:12:16 UTC
Thank you, thank you, thank you. :D

The corrections have been made! (MS Word kept telling me that "venereal" wasn't a real word and offered up that suggestion. I took it.)

But, really, many thanks to you for your read and your help!

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apathy_irath April 4 2009, 07:18:18 UTC
More of this AU. Nice. =3 (Whose idea was it to let Gilbert have his own column?).

Thanks for sharing~

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vega_pandanina April 4 2009, 11:36:48 UTC
Oh wow, I love your fic. I think you got Hungary right on, as well as Prussia, who manages to be annoying, fun and pitiful at the same time. (And Hungary's fangirling... I lol so hard.) Awesome job, I hope you write more! ^^<3

(... um, sorry for asking this, but am I missing an irony here:
... ‘Ó Gilbert, miért nem fogsz szeress?’” he said in near perfect Hungarian...
I'm so sorry, but I really don't get it. *nervous-nervous*)

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pomino April 4 2009, 17:05:39 UTC
oh wow
just omg the characterization of Prussia and Hungary. Everyone. Was just so spot on. I really loved your Prussia voice, lol I wish there was more even!

Excellent stuff *adds to memories*

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