Inc (terrible) fan fiction

[parallax_prose]

Yeah...I'm sorry guys. I need to L2rite nao kthnx. It's been a long time since I did anything like this. So if it sounds like a thirteen year old girl's Twilight story, that's why. :D I don't think many people on the friends list play Warcraft anyways, so I might be in luck and get ignored, haha. Not sure if I should post in any communities, though

Comments

[rinewen]

.... I am speechless. Wow. So wonderfully written. This is amazing :D

[parallax_prose]

Really? O_O Wow...thank you so much! You just made my morning, haha. ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed.

[ceasefire]

Awww, I loved this :) Great work!

[parallax_prose]

Thank you! :D Wow, I'm really glad you think so. Thanks!

By the way, your user name looks so familiar. I think we were in the same fandom at some other point or something, lol

[parallax_prose]

Oh, I figured it out! It was FMA. :D My old LJ name used to be Momoiro_usagi. Wow, that was such a long time ago.

[ceasefire]

I fangirl your icons. Just so you know :P

Ahaha. FMA seems so long ago now...

[yumenonozomi]

I don't know Warcraft, but I still love your writing style, it's so beautiful! *_*

[parallax_prose]

Aw, thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it!

[the__ivorytower]

First off, your fic isn't bad. *bap* So don't say that.

I will note though that it's a tad confusing to talk about the conflict between Jaina's "King" and Thrall's "Advisors", because I don't actually know what you're talking about: Daelin Proudmoore's invasion won't come much later, and neither Arthas nor Varian are Jaina's king yet. Since you're referencing Hyjal rather than, say, the Wrathgate, it's going to be much earlier. I was also somewhat surprised that Thrall would suggest their alliance dissolving so early, things actually look good at the moment, and Jaina's totally cut off from the rest of the Alliance... her own father isn't sure if she's alive or dead, that's why he comes to Kalimdor to find her. They'd probably only be really concerned about it once Daelin starts stirring shit up.

I will say, the characterization is unquestionably good, the descriptions are lovely, and I really like how they interact. Just some aspects were a touch confusing.

[parallax_prose]

Haha, well, thanks. :D I'm glad you think so.

Yeah...I definitely need to brush up on my lore, as I was referring to Varian, and now I realize that was completely chronologically incorrect. Can you suggest any good sites for getting timelines, etc, to make sure I get everything right next time? I'm new to the fandom, and I'm not nearly as familiar with the lore as I would like. Thank you! :)

Yay, I'm glad! Well, I think the next one I'll do will be at the Argent Tournament, and I think I know that lore a little better, so we'll see how it goes, lol. Thanks again for the help! ♥

[the__ivorytower]

I find WoWWiki is usually a good place to start, and I believe the world of warcraft website also has a timeline.

The tournament is actually quite fun to write about. :)

[parallax_prose]

I've found WowWiki helpful so far, so I'll definitely keep reading it. :D

I can imagine! I love your stories set at the tournament, and last night I happened to be there when Jaina arrived and...the way she stood up for Thrall made me fangirl a little, lol.

[felflowne]

*hearts this* GReat work!

[parallax_prose]

Really? ♥ Thank you!