Wednesday: Before the Storm

[parallax_prose]

Well...it seems that my fanfics are growing at an exponential rate, lol. I guess I had way too much time on my hands this week, because this got a little TL;DR. I hope people still enjoy it.

As always, suggestions and concrit are greatly appreciated!

OMG can't wait for Icecrown

Comments

[the__ivorytower]

This is fantastic, again. It's also good you mention the unrest in Orgrimmar. I'm sorry, I'm very full right now. I did want to let you know I absolutely loved your icon, and below are a couple of tiny errors I noticed:

his features twisting into a snear Sneer, hon.

"Please don't be afraid for me." Jaina responded after a pause. Might want a comma before the dialogue tag.

"Peace between orcs and humans is possible." She whispered, more to herself same comment.

But yeah, my brain is fried, but go fic. *waves flag* Giving Jaina the necklace was aww.

[parallax_prose]

Yay, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you liked the icon, too, haha. I went to Hot Topic yesterday, and after seeing way too much Twilight merchandise I was feeling amused and decided to make it. And I'm glad you liked the bit about Thrall giving her the necklace...it was just too cute. I had to do it. :D

Also, thank you for the corrections. I'll fix those right now. ♥

[metalsyko]

I really ... can't come up with a constructive, well-thought-out comment on this story other than a completely and totally fangirl "/swoon!". I absolutely love the way you write the sort of awkward tensions and restraints between Thrall and Jaina as diplomats and secret lovers. (I've seen way too much fic where she just falls swooning into his arms, audiences and the repercussions thereof be damned!) Also, Thrall singing Taretha's lok'vadnod and giving Jaina her necklace made me all misty-eyed. Absolutely beautiful.

Oh, and BEST ICON EVER.

[parallax_prose]

Thank you so much! :D One of the reasons I love this pairing is the awkward tensions, so I'm glad that you enjoyed the way I write that aspect of their relationship. ♥ And Thrall giving the necklace was just too cute to pass up. I had to do it! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you!

[scrawl42]

Everything the above two said, plus this story made me feel all warm and wibbly inside. I love that they sing about Durotan. I love that Thrall is so chivalrous. I love that it's all broken but at least they can sort-of-almost be together, briefly. Warm and sad and wibbly.

/needs orc icon

[parallax_prose]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Yes, I love Thrall being chivalrous. It's cute and fun to write him that way. I'm also glad that the story made you feel warm and wibbly, because I love mixing in a little fluff even in more serious stories. Thank you so much for reading!

[liret]

I like it! And even though I play alliance, I'm totally Team Thrall.

[parallax_prose]

Thank you! :D Oh, haha, I have an 80 horde dk, but my main is alliance. :D Team Thrall ftw, though.

[webell]

again simply amazing! keep it up :)

[parallax_prose]

Thank you! ♥ Thanks for reading.