Comments | paradox_fantasy: The Procession [Minato, Pharos]

umarekawareru in paradox_fantasy

The Procession [Minato, Pharos]

Sep 17, 2009 23:21

Title: The Procession
Author: umarekawareru
Fandom: Persona 3
Characters: Pharos/Minato, of sorts.
Rating: G
Warnings: HUGE SPOILERS for the end of P3. Seriously, don't read unless you've finished the game.
A/N: You know that writing meme that everyone and their mother did a while ago, the one that said something like put your music player on shuffle and write ( Read more... )

author: sonia, fandom: persona 3

Comments 13

numi_nami September 17 2009, 22:26:17 UTC

This made me go 'awwww'. It's refreshing to see our hero not being heroish :)

umarekawareru September 18 2009, 15:26:10 UTC

I'd be scared out of my wits if I was in this situation, to be honest. And Minato too deserves his moments of weakness, don't you think? I'm glad you liked! ♥

Who's that in your icon, btw?

numi_nami September 19 2009, 05:36:27 UTC

*A* I think so too, he's not invulnerable.

Ah, those two are OCs of mine :D

amet September 18 2009, 02:23:09 UTC

I have nothing for this but a big old, "D'awww!" ;D I love that Pharos is so preposterously gentle.

umarekawareru September 18 2009, 15:30:23 UTC

Pharos is adorable, isn't he? I'm glad you liked this ♥

chaineddove September 18 2009, 05:16:02 UTC

Hey, what's the rating on this so I can add it to the master list? ^_^.

umarekawareru September 18 2009, 14:57:15 UTC

It's good old G. /edits post/

sinnatious September 18 2009, 11:38:11 UTC

HAUNTING.

umarekawareru September 18 2009, 15:32:51 UTC

YES. ABSOLUTELY. I'm used to being terrified by things other people don't look twice at, and viceversa, and I am just SO GLAD to see your comment because the mental images were creeping me out completely as I was writing this. *___* Oh Master, what would I do without you? ♥

sinnatious September 19 2009, 07:47:21 UTC

adsfhaslkfhs Seriously I didn't know whether to cry or run away or what. It's beautiful, though. Read it again then, gave me goosebumps! (I don't see the fluff! I don't see the fluff in that at all!)

Ha ha, possibly addicted to fewer games? :D

umarekawareru September 19 2009, 15:46:21 UTC

I know, man! I mean, the black feathers (totally Ryoji's) and the dysfunctional body and Pharos, it's Death all around! Death might be romantic, but not the kind of romantic you'd associate with love, ahaha. (Although Pharos is kind of obsessed/possessive around Minato, at least in my head.) For a while there I was wondering if it was my fault that it didn't appear as creepy as it should, or whatever.

Yeah, riiiight. XD

izkariote January 4 2010, 17:20:34 UTC

Nnnnnnnnn this was lovely. The imagery was exceptional.

umarekawareru January 4 2010, 17:29:55 UTC

*____* I'm glad you liked that. The imagery was important, I think.