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[anonymous]

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[paradisamods]

You have a fine grasp on his background, but if you could, expand a little more on his personality in the About the Character section. Also, please provide a second third person sample so we can get a little more insight on his voice.

Thank you.

[anonymous]

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[paradisamods]

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[anonymous]

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[paradisamods]

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[anonymous]

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[paradisamods]

Apologies for the delay! At this time we would like to request a revised 3rd-person sample as it is hard to get a grasp of your handle on characterization from the sample provided. We would also like a revised 1st-person sample as there are many grammatical errors present (punctuation "..", capitalization "Is.. it").

Thanks!

[anonymous]

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[paradisamods]

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