Comments | paradigm_se7en: The Dreamer (Lost Fic, Rated R, Charlie, Locke, Various)

paradigm_se7en

The Dreamer (Lost Fic, Rated R, Charlie, Locke, Various)

Jul 30, 2005 09:30

Notes: fic veers off into randomness. I have no clue if it works. as it, constructive crits are very welcome, considering I wrote this rush job over six hours between yesterday and now, and I'm late for class. meep ( Read more... )

lost, locke, charlie

Comments 2

eponine119 August 4 2005, 17:47:12 UTC

This was really good. I like the complexity you bring out in Charlie, and you write Locke super, super creepy which is just wonderful. I like the idea of them coming back together, since Locke was the one who nominally helped Charlie off drugs and then they haven't interacted since. It's all very plausible, I have no trouble picturing any of this happening on the screen.

paradigm_se7en August 5 2005, 02:07:28 UTC

Thanks!

I actually rushed through this, lol - finished this in a rush on saturday for the fic challenge - had a special make up class that morning, so it's not as complete as I'd like it to have been.

But writing Locke is fun, in a twisted sort of way. And I was sad that there wasn't any interaction between them after The Moth episode - the madonna statuette seemed perfect for a recall to that.

(..and I ramble on... :P)

Thanks again for the review! It just made my day. :)