"so she turns on herself" Rita/Sybill, PG

[mondayagain]

Title: so she turns on herself
Ship: Rita/Sybill
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~500
Warnings: character death
Summary: An ending to an era of many dinners.
Prompt: one last dinner (7spells)

Comments

[mickawber]

Damn, girl.

You're writing lovely, moody, thoughtful, sad, morbid fics just now aren't you?

The idea of a reflective, sad Rita is... disturbing. In a good way.

Nice work again. If I use the word Chekhovian :points at user name: would that make sense to you?

[mondayagain]

Russian writer whose dramas ... concern the inability of humans to communicate with one another.

it does when i research a bit. :>

you are definitely the greatest reviewer, and i am always honored when you comment.

[mickawber]

Research is always good. ;-)

And thanks. But your writing earns the reviews, you know. ;-)

[mondayagain]

♥

[istalksnape]

Sybill dies the next morning with her head beneath a paisley scarf, and I write her obituary with my father's fountain pen but do not publish it.

Oh, this is beautiful. You wrote these two so v. well. I love the way you write from Rita's brain.

[istalksnape]

I submitted this sooner than I wanted.

Comment Continued-

The simple relationship you show in this, and the way you have Sybill dab her eyes with Rita's napkin. Details like that make me gush. ♥

[mondayagain]

♥

i've been imagining a rita/sybill relationship for awhile now, but i'm never sure if i want to write them as friends or as sexual partners, so in this one i kind of made it sexual out of sybill's desperation and mebbe rita has been holding a seekrit love for sybill. or something.

but i'm glad you like it! this 7spells thing is the best thing i've ever signed up for.

[moogle62]

Ooh, wow. I loved all the description at the beginning - I'm a sucker for well-written description type things.

And your Rita is melancholy and it works!

I really did like this. There isn't enough Rita/Sybill around...

[mondayagain]

♥

there definitely isn't enough rita/sybill, and i just think they're perfect together! i have 6 more fics in the works for these two, however, so there will be more fic for them! :))

[xxrupturexx]

I don't like either of them, yet my heart still broke. You have the most beautiful style. Haven't read something this good in a long time, so thanks for refreshing me.

[mondayagain]

thank you so much! i never really liked Trelawney until i wrote this--i felt sorry for what i was doing to her! :>

[featherxquill]

This is fantastically beautiful. Sad and haunting and perfect.

[mondayagain]

Thank you very much. :D